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The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school.
To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?
Some people argue that the education we receive at home is more important than that received at school, some think differently. Although what we learnt from our relatives is vital for our personal growth, I believe that school education is more essential in a wider perspective as I will explain in this essay.
To start with, the education we received from our family is priceless, it teaches us values at an early age. It also shapes us as well behaved citizens with good manners, moreover it brings us love and understanding, aspects that we could not live without. Nevertheless, this many times is not enough. The school provides us with a real platform to find our path in life. Many times while we learn we observe the different possibilities of what we will become. While learning about numbers one will want to become in an engineer, or another might fall in love with science and study to be a biologist or a doctor. For instance, when I was a school I looked after one of my teachers, he was very passionate about his profession, and made entertaining and funny classes, after seeing his commitment and love for his career I decided to become a teacher just like him.
Furthermore, kids can develop their skills at school. A lot of students develop skills that sometimes are hard to develop at home, like social skills for example. At the same time, children are able to increase their confidence in singing, playing a sport, writing or even acting. This undoubtedly widens up ways for the children’s future lives. When I was in fourth grade I received theatre lessons, our teacher happened to be a professional actor who appeared in soap operas in Colombia, many kids look up to him and ended up following his steps.
To sum up, the education we get at home is unvaluable, however school educations is more important to have
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The pie chart gives information about consumption of water related to the field in the year 2000 whereas the line graph compares the use of water between 1900 and 2000. Both supplement this information on a global scale.
Overall, it is clear to see that the sector of agriculture accounted for the majority of global consumption in both graphics. The sector of industry was the closest to agriculture while domestic and drinking water had a small marge of the usage.
As seen in the pie chart, agriculture had 70% of the water consumption around the world in the beginning of the 21st century. Industry on the other hand had an impressive percentage of 22% in the same century. Domestic and drinking water accounted only for the 8% of the consumption all together. When it comes to the line graph, it is possible to observe that agriculture had an increase almost every 30 years going from 500 km3 to 3000 km3, a considerable change during the 20th century, in 2000 this sector reached its highest peak with 4500 km3 in 2000. Domestic and industry remained almost the same for over 70 years, in the last three decays the usage of water in industry climbed to 1000 km3, whilst the domestic use barely got into the 500 km3 of use of water.
17 เมษายน 2021
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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
The world’s culture is becoming more equal. Currently, more and more people globally are adopting similar habits and activities in their free time. Although there are many advantages to this tendency, the disadvantages are more relevant.
For many years, our society has been characterized as being conflictive Countless battles and wars have taken place in our planet and these have generated many times hatred and racism among countries. Sharing our interests is a way to avoid the problem previously mentioned. By having the same culture and ways of living less discussion will occur, therefore, wars can be avoid, creating at the same time a more understanding and tolerant world but with a robot-like way of thinking.
Conversely, disadvantages to this trend have a more significant impact on the planet. If we are to see, eat and live the same things as the rest of the earth, we are running a massive risk of losing our culture. Traditions and customs shape the way we are, our own language gives us authenticity, it gives us the opportunity to express ourselves in a genuine way. Although having the same likes and dislikes sounds like a great idea, it also prevents us of being humans. We need to acknowledge that we have differences, that everybody is their own being, and to achieve that we cannot hide such singularities behind trends that want us to think equally.
To sum up, globalization is making people have similar behaviours and lifestyles, however, the importance of keeping our own cultures and customs is beyond that. It is vital that we accept and respect others no matter the differences.
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The table provides information about underground railway systems in six important cities with opening dates, kilometres of route and amount of users per year in millions.
Overall, it is clear to see that the majority of them were built in the beginning of the 20th century. It is also possible to notice that most of them have more than 100 kilometres of route except for Kyoto and Los Angeles.
Looking closely, it is a fact that London’s underground railway system is the oldest of all of them, opened at the end of the 19th century, more exactly in 1863. Tokyo, Washington DC and Kyoto followed it in descendant number. The newest system is Los Angeles’ which was only opened in 2001. In terms of Kilometres of route, London has as well the longest system among this iconic cities with 394 kilometres of extension. Kyoto has the shortest railway with only 11 kilometres of length.
When it comes to the amount of passengers who use such systems, the picture changes. Tokyo accounts for the majority of users per year with an incredible figure of 1928 million people entering the underground. The closest to that number is Paris with 1191 million people using the system. Kyoto and Los Angeles have the lowest rate of passengers with only 45 and 50 million people respectively.
16 เมษายน 2021
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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion on this IELTS topic.
Although many people believe stronger punishments for breaking the rules when driving are essential to decreasing casualties. Others think that safety on the road could be enhance by applying more practical laws. This essay will evaluate both perspectives and will give a final opinion on them.
To start with, it is important to mention that there some who state that harder punishments lead to the reduction of crashes on the road. Nowadays, people tend to be easily distracted by their phones, therefore, reckless driving is on high demand. This seems to be a minor problem with fatal consequences, however, if more serious punishments are given to those who ignore the law, these scenarios could be easily avoid.
On the other hand, more effective measures are believed to be the solution for some people. Reducing the speed limit in massive highways and having more traffic controls along the roads are some examples that could potentially save lives. Despite these measures, many drivers will still be irresponsible behind the wheel since they would know that breaking the rules will not have a real repercussion in their lives.
In my opinion, although strengthening measures to improve safety on the road is a good idea, this is not enough. That is the reason why stronger and more strict laws must be passed so drivers are aware of their acts. People need to understand that for every action we take there are consequences, and in many cases such consequences can lead to death.
To sum up, strict punishments are vital to decrease the amount of car accidents for some people, whilst for others implementing more efficient road safety measures is the way this issue should be addressed.
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The pie chart provides information about how young people in Japan and Australia use their budget in 2019.
Overall, Japanese and Australian teenagers have different interests, therefore, they spend their earnings accordingly.
It is clear to see that Japanese youngsters are keener on videogames, which means they invest the majority of their money in them, to be more specific 37%. In contrast, Australian teens invest the same percentage (37%) in food, whereas Japanese teens only spent 22% in this category. Australian teens seem to be less interested in videogames since they only invest 22% in them.
Looking in more detail, both populations use little money to buy books, only 9% for Japanese teens and 8% for Australian teens is spent. The rest of the money is distributed in less than 33% total in clothes and other items combined.
24 มีนาคม 2021
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The image gives information about the cuantity of customers in four different restaurants from
1990 to 2015.
Overall, Burger Bar and Donut Bro Increased the number of attendees throughout the years, whereas Pizza Hut and Chicken Spot had an opposite effect by showing fewer clients overtime
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It is clear to see, that at the beginning of the nineties neither Burger Bar nor Donut Bro were very popular. They only managed to have a maximum of two thousand customers and a minimum of about one thousand clients . However, after 1995 both showed an impressive improvement on their numbers, reaching an average of over three thousand costumers for Burger Bar, and amazingly almost eight thousand clients for Donut Bro.
On the other hand, Pizza Hut had a steady fall from 1990 to 2005, going from eight thousand customers to six thousand respectively. Although, there was a small surge in 2010, their numbers kept falling drastically until they reached only five thousand clients in 2015. Chicken Spot had as
well a massive drop, they started the nineties with six thousand people entering to the stablishment, then had a recovery in the year 2000, to then plumted to a shoking number of less than three thousand clients in 2015.
18 มีนาคม 2021
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English/spanish exchange
Hi everybody! I'd like to make a language exchange through Skype or WhatsApp any English native speaker, it'd be great if you're British, if not it's ok as well 😁✌️ I can definitely help you out with your Spanish.
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Any english native speaker who wants to practice both english and spanish with me now?
Any english native speaker who wants to practice both english and spanish with me now?
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Any english native speaker who wants to practice both english and spanish with me now?
Any english native speaker who wants to practice both english and spanish with me now?
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