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BEADHOUSE PROJECT [PLEASE MAKE IT MORE IDIOMATIC]
Plz make this passage more idiomatic!!! Cuz I'm going to send it to an English native speaker!!!
ANYWHERE you look it is weird please correct it without mercy!
THANKS A BUNCH!
Chongyang is coming up. We are planning to visit a beadhouse to celebrate the special day and we hope you will be able to accept our invitation to visit there together.
First off, let me introduce about the plan we made. When we get there, we will visit the elderly in their rooms in groups, presenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love. Then we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.
As some old people feel lonely, we may chat with them about their old days, changes of our city, or anything they are interested in. we may also give them some performances: singing, dancing, etc.
I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in China. If you have any suggestions, please let us know.
Looking forward to your early reply.
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The Existence
Existence teaches us how to avoid the negative or angry people and those who want to steal your energy as well as control you, and their negative effect will disturb your path of life. You can send them the energy of love in the distance, lead on to the road of light and keep in touch with people friendly, full of love and spiritual. Those people will give you love, light, energy, health, knowledge and intellect. Not related to any organization and faith system, spiritual people are unselfish, not jealous or hate others. Because of their highly evolved minds, they never attack others and they create positive energy for all human. In the same way, maintaining your attention to love and friendliness and not involving other into your undesirable situation without the force of hate, you also can stand up for yourself, remove hate, pride, selfishness, envy, greed and evil actions by universal love and friendliness and become a positive person.
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Introduction to Shenzhen
Shenzhen, is a major city in the south of Southern China's GuangDong Province, situated immediately north of Hong Kong. Shenzhen has a population of over 22 million, people would like living in Shenzhen, because Shenzhen is known as city of opportunity and city of innovation. As far as I’m concerned, different style of restaurants, recreational facilities and excellent educational resources is why I want to live in here.
First off, there are numerous restaurants in shopping mall, in residential area and even in roadside. Diversity of selection always make me hard to make a decision. Merely go to mall, you can enjoy various kind of delicacy and feel different cultural ambiance from different kind of restaurant. Shenzhen’s restaurants always attract people to come.
Shenzhen's main tourist attractions include the Window of the World, the Chinese Folk Culture Villages, Happy Valley, Splendid China and the Safari Park in Nanshan district, the Dameisha Promenade and Xiaomeisha Beach Resort in Yantian district. Tens of thousands of people spend their time in those well-known scenic spot; when I get free time, I go to these place as well. It’s nice to stay.
Moreover, the first and foremost reason for which I’d like live in Shenzhen is the abundant educational resources and educational atmosphere. Shenzhen is a center of foreign investment and since the late 1970s has been one of the fastest growing cities in the world. With the development of economy, Shenzhen’s educational level increase as well. Government attach great importance to education. Consequently, nation gave outstanding teachers and new principles of teaching. I’m getting the benefit by this excellent condition.
Late Chinese paramount leader Deng Xiaoping said: Shenzhen special economic zones was created to be an experimental ground of capitalism in "socialism with Chinese characteristics." From my perspective, the rapid development of Shenzhen is a miracle. I’m glad to live in here.
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