"Covering letter'" Would you help me to find mistakes in my cover letter please? Thank you :) Dear Sir/madam, I am writing because I wish to apply for the position Coordinator post offered in your website. This role is in the place where I have been working and I am interested because I would love to keep cooperating in the area. As mentioned, I have been working in the project named Childhood Obesity with Citizen Uk. There, I have organised listening groups with parents where, my duties involved to arrange meetings with leaders to present our project, later recruiting parents for our group and present our project in the group to collect parent opinions. In this role, I have created a networking of influences in the community with head teachers at schools, managers in libraries, children centres, leaders in church's and connections in other charities. Also, I had the experience being Information and Support advisor in Volunteer Centre Southwark (2014). The main duties were interpreting spanish speakers interest into the english language, lead them to the relevant department and making calls to speak with managers that offers volunteer positions. This position requires entry details in database, searching opportunities and making calls to arrange interviews. In addition, as Office Assistant volunteer in Pembroke House, I have been responsible for filling invoices and bills, interpreting letters for Spanish patients, providing administration support to the team and assisting individuals with their tasks associated to help the community. Currently, I am preparing my exams to became Official interpreter. To practise, I began to do translations for residents that have issues with housing. Most of the time, we attend local authorities to speak with caseworkers, tracking applications until the problem were solved. In some cases, I have in hospitals and Gp appointments. This experience gave me a wide knowledge in regards of rules and regulations that must be followed in Southwark, Lambeth and Lewisham borough. I feel confident speaking both languages that I can bring my abilities to facilitate the work with different cultures. I believe I could start actively to contribute with families in need and guide them to employment. I would describe myself as tolerant, kind, patient and at the same time, proactive and self initiative. I am passionate with office duties and I consider that, this position would bring me a huge opportunity to progress and achieve my next goals.

Gaps in the employment history Hello there, I hope you all are well and just to say thank you for your help with this entries. Now I have a question that I am seeing in employment application forms. Please if you have any advise about my answer besides the grammar corrections, it would be appreciated. Here it goes: Please explain any gaps in your employment history: Maximum length: 4000 The gaps in my employment history can be explained into two periods. The first period started in 2009. During this period, I was partly inactive due to the reduction of working hours in my work place that affected all the staff. As a result of these changes, I had spent more time in studies which taught me the basis of the office environment and help with my career prospects. Then, the second period started in January 2015, when my baby born. Since there, I spent time with the baby education for almost two years. Along the first year, I have participated with children centres activities which enrich my sense of community and known of the organisations in my area.

first contact Hi there, Thank you to all for your time in correcting my notebooks. I'm grateful for all your incondicional support :) Now I am trying having my first contact with business more briefly and please advice me how to change it in a more natural manners. Thank you Hi there, I am writing to contact with the sales department of your organisation. I would appreciate if you could please provide me the details in order for our company seek corportation with you. I am looking forward to hear from you. Kind regards

Advertising for advertising I can image how many mistakes it could contain, as I just receive few replies since I started send it. Thank you all. :-* Dear Sir/Madame I writing in regards to our services of advertising in our taxi-bike transport, commonly known in this city as "Rickshaws". We specialize in approaching the public focused in London's West End. The rickshaw service is a shuttle service that is growing, and attracts entrepreneurs to use it as an advertising medium to publicize their products or services. As you may know, advertising is an essential tool for business, so we take care of precisely direct of your message and we maintain our rickshaws precisely for its purposes. Our services include: - Keeping our "Rickshaws" on the streets in public view, especially during peak hours. As well, advertising tracking. - Seeking opportunities to inform the customer about your business. Most of the time, customers ask riders for suggestions of leisure such as, restaurants, clubs or hotels. - Managing future advertising projects for your business needs. - Promoting your product in our tours packages. Importantly, our goal is enable to increase your client list through ecological and affordable advertising addressed to all businesses. If you were interested, please do not hesitate to contact us for further information. Thanks

Email to offer my service to charities Hi everyone, Thank to all for your support. Since I register to this website I have met interesting people to chat. :) Next I will show you the email I have created for charities. I appreciate if you could review it for me. Once again Thank you. :) Dear Sir/Madame, It fills us with delight to announce that our organization has been enjoying races and walking events in the city of London from the last three years. It makes us proud to do something for the local area development. As you are aware every year more and more people participate in these events, what we are happy to see it. This year we have renovated our fleet of rickshaws, offering a more innovate and safer transport for our customers on the road. We wish to provide for your event up to 4 outdoor advertising spaces to collaborate with your goal in the coming events. Our advertising campaigns normally includes green advertising spaces that would be in public view during the peak hours, either week days or weekends within the West end of London. If you were interested, the advertising media only consist on the use of Vinyl stickers on the back, sides and/or front space of the rickshaw allowing many messages at once. These stickers can be found on a banner printer shops of your preference, normally the average cost per rickshaw is less than £20. Please for further information do not hesitate to contact me through the details below or visit our website ****** Yours sincerely,

My advertising of my services in London Hi all, I am writing in public session not to use it as a marketing tool but for your reviews about the advert I am preparing fr my business. I appreciate as much reviews as you can either positive or negative because the target for this is being the face for my new business. It is about those tricycle in central London, for many knows as rickshaws and now I am promote them for marketing service with space for advertising, bookings.... As would notice I havent practice my grammar for long, as everything it would forget. Here it goes: (Business company) is pleased to provide an optimal service to the enjoyment in our rickshaws. Our services includes decoration whether for a family trip or personalized events such as weddings, birthday, office parties... (Business company) present the product through sophisticated advertising campaigns at the attention of the audience in West End London. Due to the dozens of unique events throughout the year that fill the Londinense streets with a variety of festivities. I knew its horrible, but I have changed it so many times... If there is also a teacher with knowledge in marketing, I will be grateful to receive offers to help me with my grammar mistakes in my website.Thanks to all for your collaboration.