Help to correct a mail hi everybody! I need some help to correct this mail. I explain to you the context: I am a young architect and with some friends, we register for the architecture competitive EUROPAN. The site of project is in Austria, and a visit is provided to discover this site. I need to register my team for this day. "Good Afternoon. My team is just register for st polten. I saw the visit is provided for april 20th. We want to go to this visit. Need-we fill for a entry form or have you need some informations to complete our register? Cordially"

Exhibition Pavilion To practice my english, I’m trying to describe a projetc wich I designed during my studies. For this exercice, we had to design a small exhibition pavilion on a parc of Marseille city. This little project is take away from habitual paths. Think as a process , he is developed over tree stages to stage the discovering and reading of a book : - The invitation : a narrow corridor guide to the origin of light - The calm : a small exhibition room shows the book on a display front of a bench . The room is glazed all around. Rays of Sun across vegetation offer a diffuse ligth and a quiet atmosphere - The return : a narrow corridor go back to the parc and reality.

Motown Music At the moment, I am listening Motown Music. I like this music because rhythm is lively. I also really like voices. Singers have so much talent. When I listen these songs, I am happy.

What does it mean « au pair » ? Next year, I hope go in USA to be « jeune fille au pair ». In exchange for free room, board and laundry, I’ll help parents to take care of their children and I’ll make some houseworks. I hope I’ll discover a new and interesting culture. I also want meet many people. I am a little worried because I am scared of my host family is a little strange. But In USA the program is very good because an association will accompagny me during all my stay. Until I prepare my file and I try to improve my English gradually.

My studies During five years, I studied architecture in Marseille. It's a city in the South of France. It was so great but very difficult. I remember when you had to present our work in front of a panel of judges. We worked all night to have good plans and beautiful pictures. Gradually project progressed we needed to do again and again... and again models . But during this period I met very interesting people. Frequently they was dreamies but often they wanted to improve their world.

Learn English It’s my fisrt note. I’m learning english. I had some english lessons during my studies but I was a bad student. So my level is not good. Now I want travel and meet people around the world so I need to speak english. Gradually, I try to be better my english. I watch english movies and I listen english music as well as have a book of english lessons. For a week, I look for people to practice my oral language.