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The two maps show how dramatically the island changed after the construction for tourism. On the first map we see the island before the construction and it was absolutely free of any facilities: there were only the beach in the west and trees all over the island. After the construction these things remained at the same place but a lot of new buildings appeared.
On the second map we see that in the center of the island the reception and the restaurant were built. Moreover, tourists can find places to stay in different parts of the island. In the South of the island now has a pier and people can go sailing near it. The footpath and the vehicle track were made to connect all the facilities.
Overall, comparing the two maps, there are significant change after the development. A lot of new facilities are build to make it comfortable for the tourists.
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Please, check my essay, W2 IELTS :)
Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty and animal welfare than the previous generation. What is your opinion?
There is no doubt that modern generation has more access to information about the world's problems than the old generation had. However, many people do not believe that now young people care about the environment, poor people and animals more than it was earlier.
Personally, I think that people nowadays tend to care about environmental problems, poor people and animals much more than they used to. It can be explained by different reasons. Firstly, the world we live in is changing rapidly and many problems become more urgent. For example, people can not ignore pollution and global warming any longer as they have to solve these problems. Whereas the previous generation was indifferent to this issues.
The second reason is that technological progress gave people access to much information. As a result, young people know more about animal welfare, poverty level and many other questions. Take, for instance, homeless cats and dogs. There are plenty opportunities to help them using the Internet and find a new pet.
To sum up, I can say that access to information and realising the seriousness of problems help new generation to deal with problems in more effective way.
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Describing a Bar Chart fot IELTS W1, Please check it :)
The bar chart provides the information about the proportion of men and women in the UK who has not got any qualification. In particular, it divides people into six age groups. The percentage for people who are under 39 years is less than 10 percent for both genders. For the two first groups, 17-19 and 20-24, the percentage of incompetent men is greater than the percentage of incompetent women. There is no difference in proportions between women and men who are between 25-29 and 30-39. By contrast, after the age of 40 both proportions start to grow. There is 10 % of males lacked qualification and 11 % of females. The percentage reaches 20 % for women after 50 and 17 % for men after 50.
Overall, the bar chart illustrates a small difference in the number of males and females without qualification. By the age of 50-59/64 this number increases dramatically.
18 พฤศจิกายน 2015
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Writing Task 2
The task: The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century.Summarize the information...
The bar graph illustrates the percentage of contribution of different sectors to the UK economy in 1900, 1950, 1975 and 2000 years. In particular, it compares agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services sectors. Overall, the situation during this period changed dramatically. In the begging of the century contribution of agriculture and manufacturing sectors reached more than 40 percent while business and financial sector contributed less than 5 percent. 50 years later the UK economy got more than 50 percent contribution from agricultural income that was the largest contribution for the whole period. But by 1975, it had suffered a sharp decrease followed by a drop to almost zero percent by 2000. By contrast, business and financial services sector increased significantly by the end of the year reaching 30 percent contribution. Manufacturing sector fell steadily and by 2000 were about 15 %.
In general, both manufacturing and agricultural sectors showed downward trends while business and financial services increased during the period.
9 พฤศจิกายน 2015
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The Essay about Space Exploration
The next topic I'd like to discuss is space exploration.
It sounds like that: Space exploration requires vast sums of money. Is the amount of money spent on space research justifiable? Could the money be better spent?
This theme is interesting for me as I'm fond of everything related to cosmos, planets and stars. I watch a lot of feature and documentary films about it and also read recent news about space exploration. That's why I decided to write about it. It would be interesting for me to read your thoughts about it.
People at all times desired to understand our place on the Earth and to find the meaning of the life. For that reason, they also wanted to explore space which seemed to keep secrets about it. But as the time passed by, the research of cosmos has become more complex and, therefore, more expencive. So is there a relevant reason to continue an exploration of outer space or is it a waste o money?
Some people believe that there is no sense invest so much money to cosmic research because, firstly, there are more urgent issues that need to be funded, like starvation, global warming or health problems. Secondly, they consider that huge amounts of money spend on cosmic needs doesn't bring benefit to the general public.
However, there is also an opposite point of view. I believe that investments to space exploration can be justified. First of all, government control the money and there's no guarantee that if they save up money from cosmos research they will give it to poor people or to health-care workers. It's very likely that we will not see any changes anyway. Secondly, I'm absolutely convinced that space exploration is in the interest of everybody because we need to have an idea in what world we live, how huge it is and what is hidden from us.
In conclusion, I want to say that big amounts of money spend on space exploration is a good investment as it explains a lot of eternal questions and helps us to understand ourselves.
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What a great idea to write a public diary
Today I'm starting to use italki as a method to learn English, cultures and new ideas.
I will try to write down one essay a day and I will appreciate your corrections and fresh ideas!
The first theme I would love to discuss is an adaptation to new situations. People often find difficult to adapt to new situations. So why is it happen? What measures can we suggest to make it easier?
Changes always cause discomfort to people and sometimes it takes time to adjust to something new. However, modern life is extremely changeable and there is no other way than to adapt to any novelty in our life. So why is it so harmful and what can we do to make it less stressful?
First of all, it's hard to adapt because adaptation means changes and, of course, people don't want to give up their habits and their daily routine. As a result, they suffer from missing something dear. Next reason is our fear of everything that seems alien. To adapt successfully people have to accept unknown things and this leads to stress. In addition to this, many changes can come at the same time so the person needs to deal with all of them.
However, there are some solutions how to cope with stressful situations while getting accustomed to a new reality. One is to find something fundamental and steady in your life. For example, your partner can support you when you change job or a country to live in. It might be also your religion or even your favourite sport. Something you can rely on will help you to cope with difficulties. Another good suggestion is to find all the information about the situation. Consequently, the fear of the unknown will reduce and it will be easier to adapt.
So, in my opinion, adaptation can be less stressful and damaging if people have both something to rely on and information about new situation.
That's it. Thank you for reading:)
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