an IELTS essay I wrote（I want to know the errors I‘ve made，thank you so much for help！） QUESTION: Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interesting. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. People have different opinions on the subjects undertaken in the recent years. Either says it is more important for pupils to work well on their well-performed, favorable and preferable subjects or appear in every single one of them possible. Generally speaking, every course has its own purpose to showcase something to the youngsters, including literature, history, mathematics, physics, politics, arts, chemistry and physical exercises, which aim to build up the knowledge of nature, accelerate the curiosity, enrich a sense of the taste and broaden their horizon. Meanwhile, most of the pupils at a young age do not treat discipline as something serious, they even have no clue about what those curriculums are aiming for and what they do love to do. On the other hand, some children do know what they’re talented at and tend to do what they’re meant to do. The majority of them are quite intelligent and over-perform most of the folks at school, who are quite aware of the advantages and weakness they have. The motivation is accelerating, and children would have much more time to focus on their interests rather than anything else. But the most concerned part should also be kept in mind, only a few amount of pupils know what they exactly fancy and able to learn it well in the near future. Overall thinking, I insist that youngsters should focus on each lesson in their school time, and try to pick up something favorable when they get older.