Is grammar right? As the day went on,  It still not change any more,  Somebody is thinking of；  In the silent night,  The stars disappeared in the sky,  Somebody is looking up； want to find something eat,  But the fridge has emptied,  want to buy something back,  But only a few coins rest. As all you known, It still not change any more, Have a last cigarette, And will have last one of next.

July4 As the day went on, It still not change any more, Someone who is thinking of； In a silently night, There's still not stars in the sky, Someone who is looking up. To find something eat, But the fridge was emptied, To buy something back, But only a few coins rest.

Lost2 A place that I've looking for, There is beautiful scene that I've looked forward；There is no human's protest and struggle there. Perhaps's different from this money's world. Someone I want to be, He willing obedient to this social's rules；It's not much complaint for him to live in the world. But he knows that he can't ,and the pain would remain around him always, day by day.....

Lost2 A place that I've looking for, There is beautiful scene that I've looked forward；There is no human's protest and struggle there. Perhaps's different from this social of the money. Someone I want to be, He willing obedient to this social's rules；It's not much complaint for him to live in the world. But he knows that he can't ,and the pain would remain around him always, day by day.....

June30 I wrote down meaninglessness letters that sentence by sentence on the writing paper. and then sent it to a place of meaningless.I want to throw down something back that it made me feel as heavy as the rock.

straight dreams There are often have straight dreams in the midnight lately.I don't know whether too late for stay up.

Correct my mistakes,please. How to be free from self-doubt?It's a suffer for me to life and work every other some time. I can't blend in a new collectivity as well as always feel tire when I have to face these things.This times I choice escaped again.I'm afraid to imagine that it's been over a year . Sometimes I said to myself:It would be fine all things if not me.

who's able to correct this composition How to be free from self-doubt?It's a suffering for me to life and work every other some time. as I can't blend in a new collectivity.I always feel tire when I have to face these things.I'm afraid to imagine that it's been over a year already. Sometimes I said to myself,It would be fine all things if not me.

Bad Habit How to be free from self-doubt?It's a suffering for me to life and work every other some time. as I can't blend in a new collectivity.I always feel tire when I have to face these things.I'm afraid to imagine that it's been over a year already. Sometimes I said to myself,It would be fine all things if not me.