IELTS preperation - writing task 1 - pie charts Hey, this is another short essay for the IELTS writing task. I would be happy if you can give me some advice because my writing is not the best and I need at least band 6.5. Thanks for your help!! =) The pie chart shows the difference between six major areas of the world regarding their use of water. Overall, the pie charts show three different fields of use (industrial use, agricultural use, domestic use) for each major area. It is noticeable that western countries (Europe, North America) use water mostly for industrial purpose while developing countries from South East Asia, Central Asia, Africa and South America are more willing to distribute water towards traditional agriculture. In terms of industrial use, Europe is slightly over North America with a difference of 5% and a total of 53%, which is compared to Africa (7%), Central Asia (5%) and South East Asia (12%) a lot higher. The lowest industrial consumption of water is found in Central Asia, which on the opposite has the highest percentage regarding agricultural use. According to the data, South America's domestic industry uses the biggest share of water (19%) in contrast to the lowest share in Central Asia and South East Asia (both 7%). Compared to the huge differences in industrial and agricultural use, the domestic consumption in all areas only swings between 7% and 19% and therefore is relatively stable.

IELTS - Writing task 2 - Please help! =) I'm preparing for the IETLS. I need band 6.5 and I'm not very confident with my writing skills. I'm happy for every advice you guys can give me. TOPIC: Governments should spend more money on roads rather than railways. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In today's world, some people claim that the current governments should invest much rather into roads than railways. This essay agrees with this statement and will support the argument by looking at the distribution of modern infrastructure and the way people are optimising their needs regarding transportation. During the last century, the era of public transportation by train peaked in the middle of the industrial revolution, but since then, a clear downward trend is noticeable. Because of the easy availability of cars, which are used for short-range and mid-range destinations, it is obvious, that cheap flights take the bigger share of the long distance destinations sector compared to trains and cars. For example, flights are faster than train rides, but a flight from Berlin to London is usually about 20€. On the other hand, overcoming the same distance by using the train would be about 150€. Another point is that people, who try to fulfil their daily needs, much rather rely on cars, to be flexible and optimise their time management. The average citizen's life is not the same as maybe 70 years ago, because time schedules became looser and people enjoy a more individual life. To not be depended on the fixed schedules, the public transportation sector offers, people much rather use their cars, which makes a more developed system of roads more important than improved railways. For example, more and more employers offer flexible work times and are adapting to modern needs. This is directly related towards the use of cars and trains. In conclusion, to fulfil the needs of average citizens and compared to cheaper alternatives of the transportation by trains, the governments should indeed invest into roads rather than railways. The trend goes towards the direction of flexibility and individualism, so the utility of trains is limited and not worth to get extented.

IELTS - writing task 1 Hey there, I have to pass the IETLS with band 6.5 and I started studying today. My writing skills quite bad compared to listening, reading and speaking. I would be so happy if I would get some input from you guys. The task was to explain the attached graph in a short essay of about 150 words: The graphic shows a statistic of British students, in terms of their ability to speak foreign languages in addition to English, in the years 2000 and 2010. Overall, the graphics are split up into six characteristics (No other language, French only, German only, Spanish only, Another language, two other languages). In both graphics, the majority of students can speak either only English or additionally Spanish. In both years, a small percentage of 10% can speak German. The amount of students, who were able to speak only their mother tongue, decreased about 10% from 2000 to 2010. On the other hand, in 2010 more students are able to speak two other languages besides English. The number of Spanish-speaking students increased as well about 5%. The share of students speaking German stayed the same, but since the amount of students with two more languages increased, the percentage of french speaking students decreased about 5% and is equal to the amount of German-speaking students in the year 2010.

练习： 一个典型天 你们好， 今天我有时间， 所以我想谈谈自己的典型天， 还练我的中文。 通常我每天早上六点起床。 以后我洗澡， 做早饭，还泡茶。 茉莉茶是最喜欢喝的。 当我吃早饭的时候，我还开始复习生词或者练听力。 有时候起点有时候八点我去健身房锻炼身体。 大概十点我需要去大学上课。 通常上午没有节课，感到心情愉快。 五点下课以后， 我聊聊天跟我的朋友或者去找我的女朋友一起做好吃的晚饭。 有时候我在大学不上课， 因为我有中文课或者帮家办事。 晚上我读书， 看看youtube， 举行练习或者写汉字。 晚上十点睡觉。 我终究有一个问题给你们。 我网上想看看中文版“蜡笔小新“， 但是我找不到了。 可能某人可以帮我发网址给我。 谢谢 大家再见

Exercise - 汉语教程 你们好。 我叫Felix。我家有四口人和一只狗，爸爸，妈妈，妹妹，我和狗Tammy。我的妹妹在学校学习，爸爸在办公室工作，妈妈是一个护士，还我就一个学生。最近我学习汉语不很多，因为我有了很多考试。但现在我练汉子，以便我想改进写汉子。我觉得汉子很重要，所以每中文学生应该试图学汉字。我学习中文四个月多了。我很快乐，因为我每天做更好了。我希望我和中国朋友们往后会交谈很好。 italki朋友们，再见[emoji]。

圣诞在德国里 italki朋友，你好。 今天我有时间，所以我将要写关于圣诞在德国。而且我想练介词和中文句子。 德国人和气，但是圣诞我们非常和气。我每年去买圣诞礼物，我从不知道我给我父母应该买了礼物。在我住的地方附近有很大的圣诞市场。昨星期我在大学认识了中国女孩子。我们一起去圣诞市场买礼物。我们还吃了"Gebrannte Mandeln"。它时甜的德国反，但是它很好吃。我二十四号十二月在我的父母家里北方了我的父母。我们换了礼物，我们还吃很多德国菜，因为我爸爸是很好的厨师。我的妈妈给我一个美好的礼物。她给我一个中文书。我很高兴了看见我的家庭。 再见。=）

Italki人，怎么了？ 我两个月前开始学习中文。虽然我现在很忙为了结束我的毕业和最后学期，我想介绍我自己以便改进我的中文。我叫“Felix", 我二十三岁了和我从德国来的意即我是德国人。我的工作在大学“Technical University Chemnitz”时学生和导师。我在大学研究数学。我认为数学漂亮。他帮助思维更清楚。我想学汉语，因为我想他是美的语。我要到中国去为了吃吃好的中国菜。我的朋友，他是中国人，说了“馒头，包子和饺子非常吃”。其实我喜欢饭的亚洲，因为我一年在泰国生活了和除了泰国菜，我吃了日本菜和韩国菜。恰巧我的城市没有好的中国菜店，但是我直到将要等我拜访中国。 再见 谢谢 =）

你好！ 你好 我是FELIX 我学习中文两周了， 但是我中文很难。 现在我练习中字母表和字调以说好 我会了朋友于ITALKI。他是一个老师很好。 我在大学学习数学，但是我有空的时候，我喜欢锻炼，读书或者跟朋友们一起玩。 谢谢 再见