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an article i wrote,very grateful if you can revise it Some days ago, I happened to see a series of strange but expensive pictures. they were painted by artists worldwide. most of the patterns were simple, like lines, curves, and circles. among them. there was a picture called blank, and it was a blank sheet of paper. however it was sold at an astronomical price-5 millions dollars. those who appreciate abstractionism will believe it abstract but meaningful. different meanings can be shown in various ways, they say. but I really wonder whether a picture really say a thousand words. It can be true. there was a picture that shocked the whole world. it was a dying boy, creeping to the place where he could get food and survived. having noticed the smell of death, however, a vulture came, waiting patiently beside him, about to eat the corpse as soon as the boy breathed his last. Every time I see this picture, there were a thousand words in my mind ,like compassion, anger, shock, sadness, disappointment, etc. and the journalist who took this picture, unfortunately committed suicide at last, for he was under pressure for too long time. people continually blame him for his cruelty and hard heart, claiming that he had lost the basic human virtues. he was just a snob who sought for his own interest always, and didn’t give a hand to the weak. it was just a small picture, that created storm world wide, like the butterfly effect. hence,a picture can really say a thousand words. the opposite can be true ,but ,only theoretically. In the newborn babies’ eyes,a picture can’t really say a thousand words,for they are able to look at the world with pristine eyes,while the adults can never be successful in doing so.i the infants’ eyes, a picture is only a beautiful pattern,some times even not,without ant special meaning. And luckily,they can be the most comfortable ones in a abstract painting display.never trying to figure out the hidden meaning ,to comment on them,and to conclude that the artist is not only stressful,but also a cynic.people are never judged d by sterotypes,not like the people nowadays,often judge others from their past experience.thus,it is likely for them to agree that a picture really say a thousand words,but not in words.
17 ตุลาคม 2015
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how can i find the purpose of a speaker in the listening it 's all about my toefl lessons.i always have a hard time in grabing the purpose of the speaker in the listening test.for example,the questuion can be "why does the professor say this",and "what can be inferred when the student says this",i feel terrible when i face this kind of problems.i tried to watch "friends",but there wasn't a grat help,what can i do now.i really appreciated your help.thank you.
3 ตุลาคม 2015
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Atrip to Lunxun park in Shanghai I wonder whether you know Lunxun or not,so I shall introduce Luxun first.He was a writer in China during the 1920s,1930s.He was also a critic,so his articles cannot be easily understood.And this park was built to remember his greatness.This great man was buried in this park.And there are two trees which might be 100 years old,embracing his grave.There was also a fountain in the park ,where people could once frank water directly from.To my surprise,my father told me that he once studied english there after classes,siting in a pavilion.Before finishing the trip,i also got a chance to sing my favourite song with lots of elderly people,for there is a choir in that park.
3 ตุลาคม 2015
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a trip to a forest park in shanghai Yesterday, I went to a once remote park in Shanghai.I remembered that when I first came to that park,it was a winter day.The wind was blowing and the weather was cloudy.I felt freezing,coming to a restaurant to have a nasty meal.But the environment was very ecofriendly.There were trees everywhere and people could rarely be seen.But now,it was not the case at all.The park was full of people,screaming,running,talking loudly.The sun was shining and the weather was fairly warm.I felt vey comfortable,having a tasty meal in the same restaurant.But the environment was ruined.Some trees had been cut down to build an amusement park and even the restroom was overcrowded.what a shame it is!
3 ตุลาคม 2015
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shall i use informal or formal writing style in my toefl test After I learned about how to write a good essay in toefl test,I got really puzzled.Toefl writing is about critic thinking,kind of debating ,like"should we tell the truth anytime,use specific details to express your opinion",etc.It seems like a very formal essay.But some of the sample essays are not so formal.They frequently use ?and ! in that (my teacher told me that these expressions should never be used in a formal writing).And the last paragraphs are somewhat joking,like if you want to buy a car,that's ok,but just mind your pocket,that kind of thing.So,could you please tell me which style I should chose?and I really appreciate your help.
26 กันยายน 2015
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tasty snacks in my school canteen hi,everyone.i am a student from a school whose snacks are incrediably tasty.best of all ,thet were served at night.and that resulted in a miracle in our school.every night before 9:00 pm,the gate of our building was always overcrowded.students anxiously waited for the gate to open,kind of prisonlike ,right?(just kidding).as soon as the gate was opened,we rushed out,at the spped of one hundred metre dash,to the canteen.afer long time standing in line,we got it at last!there were noodles,dumplings,roasted beef,curry and even porridge.we shared our food with classmates and enjoyed our school life a lot .
26 กันยายน 2015
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this was a perfect week my new semester has just begun.school life was colourful,and full of fun.one of the most interersting part is to joining clubs.i was happy to join a club which designed a year book.,and another one,which members were debating with each other.best of all,it based on western style debates,not our local ones.but one of the club members was so careless,he just told me to come at a certain time,without telling me where i should go.that resulted in wandering around the campus for a long time.that was an amusing experience,right?
26 กันยายน 2015
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the meaning of the name Kitty Hello,everyone.I am a student in an internatinal high school in Shanghai,China.And my name is Kitty. This name is very situable for me because my family name in Chinese is related to it.But after entering high school,my English teacher and my Music teacher both asked me whether i need to change my name(they are all from English speaking country).So i wonder if there is some special meanings in this name in western countries.And i do not mind if it has some terrible definations.Just tell me please.I will greatly appreciate yout help.
19 กันยายน 2015
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a sick week worrying too much about going back school on sunday night(i live in a dormitory during weekdays),i got sick that night,with nightmares.and in the morning,i failed to get up.pills were taken,and i slept from 7am to 11 am.and after reading books for three hours ,i kept onsleeping from 2 pm to 5pm.what a nice sleep.so,i went back school dizzy .after two days,misfortune descended on me agagin.having eaten too much in the cateen,i got a diarrhea ,and sufferd until today.what a miserable week.but i all right now!
19 กันยายน 2015
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my amazing military training i have been training for a week with all my classmates,for in china,every high school student must do so in order to enter their new schools.as a whole,that was an amazing and unforgeetable experience.the living condition was harsh and the restrooms smelled bad.but fortunately,the food was extremely yummy and i enjoyed them a lot.there was a vendor who sold snackes to us,but the price was very high.obviously,money was spent quickly.the training was exhausting,and i went to bed dog tired every day.our instructor was only three years older than me,so we talkes happily together.he said he had learned a lot from a military school,and i learned a lot painfully,too.my poor legs hurt for a whole week since then.
12 กันยายน 2015
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