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Public transportation
Since the amount of cars on the streets notably increased, public transportation became expected to reduce the countless number of cars, that results in traffic jam; However, the actual number of cars remained the same. For instance, In Brazil the public transportation is uncomfortable and ineffective.
The public transport lacks comfort and security. To illustrate, at bus stops in Rio de Janeiro there are not air conditioners and enough seats; besides that, the bus are always crowded and people have to stand on them. All this considered, a few people who could use forms of public transportation drive cars due to the ineffectiveness of them.
The increase of cars on the streets not only results in traffic jams, but also causes environmental issues, as well as air pollution due to CO2 and CO emission; littering; and wastewater by industries which build cars. Indeed, cars, as a result of egregious of public transportation, contribute for all of those dilemmas.
In conclusion, it's necessary to analyze the situation, and improve the ways of transportation in the cities; moreover, it is also important to upgrade comfort and security so that people use public transportation instead of "private transportations". Therefore, air pollution will decrease, littering will decrease, traffic jams will decrease, and, likewise, life quality will increase.
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Major
Good evening, I wrote a little text for elections:
Good afternoon to everybody, women and men, who are the future of our city. Before beginning, I'd like to tell you a story. When I was just a little kid, my mother used to say that we must be good in what we are doing. At the time, I did not understand what that would mean, but now I do. That's why I ask you to trust me.
Nowadays, our city has some important problems: our system of security isn't working as it should, our children aren't getting education as they should, and our people aren't being treated as they should be. I want to change that, I want to change our city; and for that, I ask your help.
Our system of security is completely casual. Many people just like me and you are being killed, and their killers aren't being punished. The first thing we will do for a more secure city is to revise the training our police receive. After that, we will revise the entire police patrolling route; this will increase the efficiency of the police. Finally, we will upgrade all the police buildings, and all the equipment. With these improvements, our city will be more secure for our citizens.
Another problem that must be solved is our underachieving educational system. We must make three main improvements. The first one will consist of better training for our teachers, and a raise in their salaries. The second one will be an upgrade in the school buildings, using the most recent concepts for our children's learning. We expect a better space for our children. Finally, we will contract professional people to revise our pedagogical plan. We want to make this city's system of education one of the best of the world.
Finally, but no less important, our health system is failing. We can change it with 3 steps. The first one will be to improve all the equipment available for our doctors. Then, people will receive the best treatment as they deserve. The second thing will be to upgrade the buildings. Finally, to further reduce lines, we will create more hospitals. When these steps are completed, we will have a great system.
Those are my goals for this city: equal rights, and a good life for everyone. To reach them, I ask you for your vote. I won't disappoint you!
Thank you.
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