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Woolly Mammoth
Hi! Could you please help me to make this text sound more natural? Thank you!!!
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The woolly mammoth (Mammuthus primigenius) is an extinct mammal from the Ice Age, closely related to modern elephants. They looked like their relatives but covered with a thick layer of fur to maintain body heat. On average, the shoulder length of an individual was between 2.74 m and 3.35 m and weighed 6 tons, females, however, were up to 1m shorter, were lighter and had smaller tusks compared to males. It is believed that the animals used their tusks to explore places covered with ice and snow while looking for grass to feed. The populations of the species were widely distributed in Tundra biomes and grasslands from Eurasia and North America. Like humans, mammoths had a social structure, in which females and their cubs lived in groups, while males remained solitary.
These peculiar creatures disappeared approximately 10000 years ago, with a notable exception: The 300 mammoths of the Wrangler Island in Siberia that remained as a population until 4000 years ago. It is well known that humans and mammoths had a very close interaction during the Ice Age.
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Deutsch lernen
Hallo!
Mein Name ist Paula und ich bin 24 Jahre alt. Ich komme aus Kolumbien, ein großes Land in Südamerika. Ich Sprache keine Deutsch aber ich möchte lernen es zu sprechen.
Ich bin eine kleine Person. Ich messe 1.60 m und meine Schuhgröße ist 37. Der Farbe meine Haare ist braun, meine Augen sind auch braun, ich bin eine einfache Person. Meine Lippen sind dünn, klein und rosa. Ich mag den Winter, ich liebe Vögel, und ist wunderschön wenn ein Vogel sitzt in einem Zweig und Schnee im Hintergrund.
Am Morgen esse ich Croissant mit Kaffeegetränke. Zur Mittagessen, esse ich Pizza oder Panini. Ich essen nichts anderes.
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เนื้อหานี้มีการละเมิดหลักเกณฑ์ชุมชนของเรา28 ตุลาคม 2017
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Looking for a place
Hi!
My name is Paula, I am 24 years old and I just arrived to Munich. I came here to study a 2 year Masters in Paleontology at LMU. Therefore, I am looking for a nice place to live in during my stay in Germany. The location depends on the traffic connections, distance to the Paleontological Museum of Munich (Richard-Wagner-Str. 10) and the stores nearby. As for myself, I am very organized person, and I love to cook. I am also very peaceful, so I won´t cause any trouble.
Do you have a place for me or any further questions? You can send me a message using this platform, or via Whatsapp.
Have a wondeful day!
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Thank you for your help!
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Addicted to Facebook.
Now, I am trying to stay away from social media. I finished my career a month and a half ago and since then, I´ve not been able to find an entire day of peace. I have nothing to do, which is a serious problem considering I live in a small town that is half an hour from Bogotá, the capital city of my country. That´s why I became addicted to Facebook.
Being addicted to Facebook is a serious thing. I usually spend about 7 hours in my Facebook page. I like to find out thing about people I know, I love to chat with my friends (or anyone) and I like to watch funny videos. But when you realize you can´t sleep well and you are developing weird relationships with some of you facebook friends in which you depend on the contact with them and you are giving them a lot of information about your private life; when you try to talk with someone face to face or virtually and you have nothing to say because your brain isn´t working anymore, you start asking yourself if is healthy to you to spend time in that way.
This writing exercise is helping me to distract my mind from other things. Besides learning English I am doing a lot of fun activities (yes, fun activities) this month. For example, I´m reading a book called “La Vorágine”, which is very interesting because describes Colombian landscapes. I´m also learning about Colombian history and history of photography. That´s ok, I guess, beacuse I´m 22 and time is passing by very fast, I should spend my time in memorable things…
Thanks for you help :).
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HEEEELP PLEASE
Hi everybody, I am starting a crowfunding campaing to buy a bike for my dog, pleaaase help me to correct the mistakes on the text.
Hello
My name is Paula and my life partner is Tesla. She is a dog that resulted from the cross between a Labrador and Border Collie . Months ago , we decided to move to a new house in the city. Although Tesla has more space, we did not have a very important factor : the absence of parks in our neighborhood. Before, she ran and remained in constant physical activity . Now , in the absence of adequate space , she can´t run and play, because the streets are dangerous.
Tesla , weighing 20 kilos , currently weighs about 28 kilos .
WE NEED YOUR HELP! With 200 USD we can buy a bicycle and adapter to give long and invigorating walks to Tesla and so , she will have a healthy life.
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Colombia
As I promised, I´m going to talk you about my country so you can know more of this beautiful place :).
Colombia
Colombia is a country placed in the north-western part of South America. It is bordered by Ecuador and Perú to the south, Brasil and Venezuela to the east and Panamá to the north-east. The other part of the territory is bounded by the Pacific Ocean and the Caribean Sea (Yes, we have coasts two coasts).
The area of the country is 1 141 748 km² , which places it as the 26º largest country in the world. In spite of the territory´s size, the population is no longer than 49 million people. Colombia is a Republic divided in 32 departments. The capital city is Bogotá, and is placed in the department of Cundinamarca.
The official language is Spanish, a language was brought by the Spaniards during the conquest period. Besides Spanish, there are a lot of native languages (60 aprox.) speaked by indigenous communities.
Well, those are general facts that you should know :). But I want to talk about other things that I find more interesting.
If you hear people saying that Colombia is a multi-something country, please, believe them. Colombia has a very vast and diverse territory, in all the possible ways, the are a lot of differences here that don´t allow us to have a single identity a Nation. Let me explain you this affirmation with some points:
1. There are six natural regions in Colombia (Andean, Caribean, Pacific, Insular, Amazon and Orinoco). Natural regions are defined using criteria like the climate, the reliefe of the zone, the vegetation and the type of soil.
2. Colombian ethnic diversity is the result of a mixture of amerinidian people, africans brought as slaves in the past and Spainiards. As a minority, we also have the presence of migrants from Europe and Asia. Due to the important differences in the landscape characteristics between the regions and the historical development of each one, there are big cultural contrasts here! So much so, that there are LOTS of accents, and they are very, very distinctive to the zone :).
3. Colombia is one of the most biodiverse countries in the whole world! So far, there are 54871 discovered and discribed species of plants and animals. Once, a teacher told me that only in his bedroom in the Amazon, there were more kinds of bugs that in the whole UK!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r9Nz7n0_zI4
That´s all for now! :) I hope you enjoyed it a little bit :).
Thanks for your help.
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About Colombia
Hi!
I´m a colombian girl who wants to learn to speak English. Now, my level is B1 (lower intermediate), and I want to improve it in the next months!
Why? Because I want to be a good scientist :).
So, I decided to start writing on my notebook. The topic I choosed is Colombia. In the following months I´ll write about my country for you to know about this amazing place!
Please, please, please help me! You can make corrections to the text and, if you want, you can also ask me some questions :).
Kisses.
Paula.
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