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IELTS writing passage 2
Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
Answer:
Nowadays, there are increasing number of people who volunteer to do some unpaid community services in their spare time, like working for a charity or teaching younger kids to play sports. Some people say that we should make these unpaid community services as a necessary part of high school education. I basically agree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, it would be an effective method to help those students to develop some valuable skills. By doing those volunteer work, students can learn how to communicate with other people work in a team as well as how to manage their time and study better. In addition, they can also develop good qualities like selflessness and a sense of responsibility by taking part in these community services.
Compulsory community work can also help students to keep fit. It is said that many students choose sit in sofa and watch TV for a long time after school, which contributes to their weight a lot. So it would be a good way to let those students lose weight by making them do some physically consuming work like mowing the lawn in a community.
Some people who are against this idea may argue that compulsory work will reduce the study time of students. However, even if these students do not need to do volunteer work, they would normally spend their time in playing computer games and watching TV rather than studying. So it is better to do some community work than to sit in front of a screen. And we can also teach these students some time management methods to solve this problem.
In conclusion, I think it is a good idea to send students to community to do some services after school and I hope this programm will be put into action in the future.
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Is 'profit' often used in singular form or plural form
I feel a little confused by the word 'profit', sometimes it is used in singular form, but other times it is used in plural form
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IELTS writing passage
• Many adults try to learn some practical skills. Some of them choose to learn from a teacher in a class, while others do it on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Answer:
There are conflicting views on which way of learning some practical skills is better for adults. Some people prefer to follow teacher's instructions in a class, while others study those skills by themselves. From my point of view, both of them have some advantages.
Some supporters of learning skills from teachers argue that it can help us master those skills more effectively and offer us opportunities to have more fun during study. It is doubtless that with the help of teachers, we can know better about which certain areas of the skills we should pay most attention to, and avoid wasting too much time and efforts on some other less important areas. In addition to the efficiency, we can also enjoy the company of our classmates in a class study, and can learn those practical skills in a more pleasant and relaxing atmosphere.
However, some people would say that by learning practical skills independently, we actually gain other potential abilities. When we learn the skills by ourselves, we are developing self-thinking and problem-solving abilities which are very helpful when we try to learn other knowledge. Also, after successfully mastering some extremely difficult skills ,we can enjoy a huge sense of achievement which will enhance our confidence a lot.
Personally, I think both ways have their own advantages, but I would say I prefer to study on my own, because I think those abilities which we gain from the process of self-study are more important than the skills themselves, because skills and knowledge can be easily and quickly forgotten, but abilities remain long.
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Need some help
What does "pin down" mean in
"It's hard to pin down exactly, without falling back on stories, to describe this sentiment that most of us feel"
it's hard to understand.
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Need some help
What's the difference between "depict" and "describe", I am confused by these two words, due to their similarity. Can somebody help me? Thanks a lot.
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Goals to achieve
I forgot to write take online speaking class today, or sorry it's actually yesterday, since it's already 1 am now. And I found this website by accident, so I am writing this notebook to see if there are really some nice guys to correct my grammar mistakes. I just read some Chinese notebooks written by non-native Chinese speakers , they are generally great, but still have some grammar mistakes and inappropriate vocabulary , which reminds me that my English composition may look like as weird as those articles to the English speakers, and I corrected several those articles a bit. Hope that helps.
However, I truly need to write some articles as practice for the IELTS exam tomorrow, because only in that way, I could have chance to get a 6 in writing part in the next examination.
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