Innovative Dongguan
We are the world,we are the future.
In the past,there are a large of companies in Dongguan.So,there is so much pollution around our surrounding area. But now,something has changed,innovative Dongguan seems possible.There are a lot of companies moving to the inland.
In my opinion,innovative Dongguan means everthing gibes proirily to people. People in Dongguan should have innovative thinking.Dongguan is used to be a fishing village. However,there are many of buildings built now.
The mayor of Dongguan Weidong Liu lay stress on reforming the innovative thinking to promote the development of education. He hoped provide quality education for the students. He provided material benefits for the teachers as well.
In a short,we should learn more form other's advantages and use them. We will average up ourselves.
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