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IELTS. General writing task 2.
A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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In our days major part of increasing modern society have all neccesary conditions for comfortable life, such as : personal own transport, organic food, vaccines for health, synthetic clothes and so on. And animals took a big role in that inventions. In this essay we will talk about general issue of the animals in peoples life.
Some experts believe that animals should have the same rights like humans have. For instance, we do not need more use horses like transport in our days. Instead of horses we using vehicles. And, from experts point of view we have to care about wild population. However, in several regions where absolutely no roads, people still use horses like a transport because it is only one type of transport which local society could use there. On one hand using a horse like a transport is a possible way to live in comfort in theese regions, on other hand government has to increase local dotations for new roads.
According to statistics many inventions in the world was discovered by using animals. Vaccines are good example. Many scientists using rats in their experements by testing vaccines on some groops of rats. It convenient, scientists can see the result and in consequense then they can use the right type of vaccine for people in farmacology.
In conсlusion i would like to say that animals should to satisfy various humanity needs and we need to keep them under control. Although we have to keeping them in comfortable conditions like in their wild life. So in our days we have problems more important than animals rights, and government has to make an analyse to solve this issue.
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somewhere about 250 words. IELTS standarts of task 2 general writing.
I wrote this for about 35 minutes. I didnt use any help and google translate or some kind of that.
If somebody had an experience in essay writing - i will be glad for your advises.
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Can you give me a hand in Eng. grammar?
from one of exercises.
Correct :
One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business.
That what i wrote :
One of your friends asked you to be a partner in his new business.
The same , but without "HAS". Is always there must be "HAS" ?
What proposition of "HAS" in this sentence ?
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My first note
Hello everyone!
My name is Rostislav. I am from Russia, Moscow.
I trying to improve my english language skills. Recently i joined to english classes which prepare for IELTS exam.
There 2 weeks of study. One week passed , one week left. On this study i have been got plenty of useful information , such as tips for essay writing which i never know before, and some tips about speaking test.
I hope that in consequence i will obtain desireable mark on this exam.
I need not less than 5.0 . Well, more the better.
*I wrote this text without any help like google translate. only one correction was - changed "must" on "might".
*desireable might be incorrect , because i dont know how to express my mark wich i wish to obtain.
* I will be glad for you corrections and any responds.
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*IELTS* How to improve listening skills?
Hello everybody. I am going to prepare for exam, but my listening skills is not so good. I would like to get your experienced advices about it. What is the best way on first step in practice of listening? What would you can advise?
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