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Could someone take a look at my short text about Climate Change?
"Climate Change" is real. How is possible that some people deny its existence? A few days ago I came across a magazine (by chance) that I had forgotten among other books. I read an article about "Climate Change". I was surprised to read that within the five countries more affected is Chile included (or: Chile is one of them). There are a lot of evidences about the changing climate around the World.
Greenland in the past April had the highest temperature ever registered.
In The Artic ice has declined significantly over the past three or four decades. China suffered the past year one of coldest winters in the last 50 years.
In our country, Chile, over the past three or four decades we have saw how the Atacama's desert has gone gaining ground and how in the South of Chile, where are some of the most rainy places in the planet, the rains have been gradually decreasing. Maybe, one of the most important feature of the change climate are its extreme events. We have faced sometimes long periods of drought, othertimes torrential rains. We have also had extreme temperatures, like this Spring that we had the warmest day in our Spring's history with a temperature up to 38 Celsius degree.
The most likely causes of this change lies in human actions. So, I wonder again, how is possible to deny something that show us many evidence? I only have one answer: "economics interests". (I'm sure that some economics interests doesn't get along with "the nature" (or The Earth)).
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On Good Behavior? Could someone take a look at the next sentences?
I translated these sentences from Google translator into Spanish and they seemed me well. But, are they really well written? Do they make sense in English? Maybe, do use other expressions, wich ones are they?
1. In my childhood I had on good behavior.
2. Please, keep up the good behavior.
3. Keep we up the good behavior.
4. They kept up on good behavior.
Thanks in advance.
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"Encouraging to Write". Could someone correct it?
I just came across with a correction written by you. Please, let me expand on my comments. First at all, many people wonder (I include myself) when they write in other language if they have been understood by readers.
When I write in English I know that I have made mistakes, but how confusing have I been?
Now, in your second text you have some mistakes (they were corrected in the correct way), however I understood it perfectly.
Well, I only want to encourage you to write and write. I think is a great way in order to learn a new language.
Finally, I congratulate you on helping other people learn English by correcting their texts.
Best regards.
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Kittens (Could someone take a look at the text?)
A few days ago I found this cat and its kittens. They were abandoned and seemed bad fed, I picked up the cats putting them into a basket, but I was afraid to be injured by the cat. The first thing I did it was to use a little trick putting a little piece of meat inside the basket and then I waited to see what would happen, then Mom and sons came into the basket.
I carried them to my house, but I have other pets, 5 dogs. Dogs and cats do not get along, so I called to my neighbor who was happy to receive the new visitors. I took a photo, it is attached to the bottom of the page.
11 ธันวาคม 2016
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Kittens
A few days ago I found this cat and its kittens. They were abandoned and seemed bad fed, I picked up the cats putting them into a basket. I was afraid to be injured by the cat, so I put a little meat inside the basket and I waited to see what would happen, then Mom and sons came into the basket. I took a photo, it is attached to the bottom of the page.
11 ธันวาคม 2016
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Afraid // Coul someone help me?
Could someone clarify me some doubts:
1. Is "afraid" used correctly?
2. If I use "that" after "afraid", does the
meaning change or not?
3. Are the sentences written fine?
1. I am afraid she has gone.
I am afraid that she has gone.
2. People afraid to hold a conversation in a new language.
Thanks in advance.
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She / Herself. Could you take a look at the text.
"She has bought a pair of shoes"
for whom? For her or other person?
I want to say she bought the shoes for herself, using "has bought". How could I write that sentence? Is there more than one way to write it?
I would be grateful if you could help me
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"Take a look at". Could someone help me?
Wich one is correct? Is there any mistake?
I would be very grateful if you take a look at my text (or: if you take a look to my text).
Thanks in advance.
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Long way ahead or long way to go?
These statements are correct? Are similar? Are they correctly written?
1. I have a long way to go learning English (or for to learn English).
2. I have a long way ahead learning English (or for to learn English).
Thanks in advance.
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Farming and its Challenges. Corrections, please.
If we work hard keeping in our minds a clear goal, I'm sure we can be succesful in our jobs. Farming is a hard work that takes many skills and tasks that should it develops every day. We have to face many inconvenients during the year, there will always be problems to solve; sometimes shortage of labor, other times insect pest, but the most difficult for to face is the weather. How we can do in front of a storm? Specially when we are ready to iniciate our harvest; or what to do if we are suffering a long period of drought. Obviously, the climate is changing so our activity it must be adecuate to the new challenges.
Now returning to my initial point, I'm really happy we started our harvest, collecting cherries one by one. Yesterday in the packing process I took the photo attached at the bottom of page. You can see 2 beautiful cherries of big size, as a result a long and hard year of work.
7 ธันวาคม 2016
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