Is this sentence correct? Please help me make it better! Thank you! Age of the cases were mainly distributed between 20-39 years old, accounting for 55.45% (112/202), have been married for 58.42% (118/202),

My recipe of pancake! I like cooking pancakes for breakfast. Uarally I cook pancake once a week! Perhaps you would ask me why only once a week? Because my daughter likes different breakfast everyday. I would share the way I cook pancake below. 1. Last night making paste and put a little yeast power into the paste; ( in hot summer you have to put this paste into refrigerator) 2. In the morning cuting green vegatables to small pieces and put them to your paste, I will add an egg. ( I add one vagables once time. ( I like spinach) 3. add some sesame and salt 4. put some oil to your pan and heat it 5. add some paste to pan and make it to a pancake. Can you understand me? I don't think so!

My weekend This weekend my sister cousin visited me from ShangHai. We had a great time. Her daughter is similar age with my daughter, so they played well together. We made dumplings together, and we had delicious dinner. Making dumplings is a teamwork, and we got a lot fun. I think one of the reason that chinese love dumplings is making umpling is family time. No matter adults or children can join the teamwork of preparing.

The words i have learned today I think it is quite intresting that when I read I know more vovabulary. when I talk I just use those words which are very simple and familar to me. Practicing a lot helps me to use these words easily. Today I learn some words. I know its meaning but never use them during my talk. they are " expire; valid; beforehand". I want to practice them by creating sentences here. Your lession package will expire in a month. please order the left lessions as soon as you can. Your emailaddress is valid and please make sure it once more. The examation is going to begin I have to go to toilet beforehand.

Is there difference between beforehand and in advance? If I say " you have to book tickets beforehand. Is it correct? Or can i replace beforehand with in advance? I really appreciate your answer! It is better to give some examples.

How do you learn English? As a student I did not enjoy learning English. I just wanted to get a good mark. Our English lesson was very boring and I did not like it. The result is that I just could pass the exam. I can not use English to speak, to write and so on. Now As an adult I begin really enjoying learning English. I read English fiction. I listen to English programs. I learn English songs. I make lanauge partner here. I have lessons here. Everything is so interesting! I would like tell the god, thank you! I do not have to take an exam any more!

Making a shopping list Usually I won't make a list before I go to supermarket. I often buy more things than I need. I told myself I have to make a list. But it is not easy to change your habit, isn't it? Today I went to supermarket. I thought I need to change on this special day. So I made a shopping list. I was so happy with my list. After I checked out I found I still buy some stuff which was not on my list!

Merry Christmas! Merry Christmas to you! Christmas is an important day all over the world. It is the same in china. But you must not imagine that I had never heard Christmas when I was a little girl. I grew up in a little village westnorth china. Nowadays every kids love Christmas because they receive presents this day. My daughter is one of them. This Christmas I cut some small branches of pine in the garden of our neighborhood. We made a Christmas garlands together. And we decorated it with pineals. We had a lot fun. We got a Christmas tree which was cut by gardeners in winter. Actually it is a branch without leaves. My daughter loves this Christmas tree and has decorated it. It is free and nice. Now she is sleeping soundly and the present is just under her tree. This is my home style Christmas in China. How about yours?

Midwinter in China These days there are so many festivals. 2 days ago it was midwinter and people celebrate this day in China. At midwinter the night is the longest night of a year. Chinese people even regard this day as the more important day than Chinese new year in some cities. Usually People would eat dumplings in north China, and in south China people would eat rice ball soup which is a sort of dessert. From midwinter it would be colder and colder. But the daytime is longer and longer. The earth is accumulating power and energy to give new life in spring.