Guys please check this short IELTS writing exercise for grammar mistakes On the following diagram we can see the information about global sales of three different products. In the period from 2000 until 2003, people spent almost 20 billion dollars on this category. However, it was still the least popular product among the three represented. Likewise, the amount of money spent on DVDs or video was also constantly increasing since 2000. By 2003 it was almost as popular as CD, with more than 20 billion dollars spent. It was the biggest change among the three categories during the period. Finally, the sales of CDs were decreasing every year since 2000. In 2003 it was still the most popular product with more than 30 billion dollars spent worldwide. However, it is clear, that in four year the sales of CDs fell from 35 to 32 billion.

Guys please check this short IELTS writing exercise for grammar mistakes The following diagram displays information about the average prices for accommodation in five major cities around the world. The prices during the period between 1990 and 2002 are compared with the prices in 1989. It is clear that in New York, Tokyo and London average prices were lower by 5% for New York and by 8% for Tokyo and London until 1995. However during the period from 1996 until 2002 there was an increase in prices in these cities. The most significant increase took place in London, where the prices were higher by 12% compared with 1989. As we can see, there was also an increase in New York, where in 1996-2002 period the prices were higher by 5% in comparison with 1989. In Tokyo prices for accommodation were still lower during 1996-2002 period than in 1989, but slightly higher than in 1990-1995 period. In Frankfurt and Madrid the prices for accommodation were slightly higher between 1990 and 2002 than in 1989.The percentage change in average house prices was insignificant in both cities during the whole period.

Guys please check this short IELTS writing exercise for grammar mistakes. N10 On the following graph we can see the situation in regards to the energy consumption in the US. As we can see, there have also been made projections up to the 2030. Out of the six represented types of fuel, Petrol and Oil was, and according to the projections will be the most used. Despite the slight decline during the early 1980s, it is expected that by 2030 the consumption of Petrol and Oil will increase up to 47 quadrillion units. In second and third places, coal and natural gas were at almost the same level of consumption in 2008. However, by 2030 the consumption of coal is expected to be higher than natural gas with 32 and 25 quadrillion units respectively. The three remaining types of fuel, which are nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower were at the same level in 1980. By the 2030 the usage of hydropower will remain almost unchanged. Nuclear and solar/wind usage will be insignificantly higher. It is clear, that by 2030 the energy distribution by fuel will change insignificantly.

Guys please check this short IELTS writing exercise for grammar mistakes. N9 On the following graph we can see the situation in regards to the energy consumption in the US. As we can see, there have also been made projections up to the 2030. Out of the six represented types of fuel, Petrol and Oil was, and according to the projections will be the most used. Despite the slight decline during the early 1980s, it is expected that by 2030 the consumption of Petrol and Oil will increase up to 47 quadrillion units. In second and third places, coal and natural gas were at almost the same level of consumption in 2008. However, by 2030 the consumption of coal is expected to be higher than natural gas with 32 and 25 quadrillion units respectively. The three remaining types of fuel, which are nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower were at the same level in 1980. By the 2030 the usage of hydropower will remain almost unchanged. Nuclear and solar/wind usage will be insignificantly higher. It is clear, that by 2030 the energy distribution by fuel will change insignificantly.

Guys please check this short IELTS writing exercise for grammar mistakes. N8 Recently, there have been a lot of debates among the governments of different states about the various problems of languages. One of the most discussed topics is that some languages go out of use and disappear. The problem is very controversial and lots of opposite opinions were expressed on the topic. Some people think that a language is only a tool for communication. In a very practical sense, we all use language as an ability to express ourselves, and as a consequence learn other languages for more opportunities. Some languages are considered to be more important than another, because more people use them worldwide. As a result there is an opinion that life would be easier if there are fewer or even just one language. This point of view may be understood, although would be more convenient for those who already are native speakers of the more popular language. For the minor language speakers it may be difficult, not only to learn a new language, but also to acceptthe cultural differences. These sort of differences are an evidence that a language, apart from being a communication tool, is also a significant cultural heritage. In various ways, it affects the individual’s behavior and mindset. Thereby, a language is also a very important part of the cultural heritage, national pride and uniqueness. Consequently, it may be considered as a great loss for the population when its language dies out. In conclusion, I would like to remember an old Chinese expression, which says: “You are as many times a human, as many languages you know”. In my opinion, any existing language must be preserved and taken care of. As a modern society, we have all the necessary skills and information to make our life easier not by eliminating languages, but rather by learning new ones. I am totally sure, that by learning less popular languages we can secure them from dying out and also make them reasonably popular.

Guys please check this short IELTS writing exercise for grammar mistakes. N7 On the following chart we can see that the number of minutes of telephone calls has drastically changed in the period from from 1995 until 2002. The changes also occurred in general structure of the 3 main types of calls in the UK. First, we can see that from 1995 to 1999 the number of local - fixed line telephone calls was increasing. After the peak in 1999, the number was constantly decreasing and in 2002 was slightly more that 70 billions. On the other hand, the number of minutes of telephone calls in the two remained categories was constantly increasing. The time spent using mobile phones in 2002 was still less than the time spent on national and international - fixed line calls, with 45 and 61 billions respectfully. Nevertheless, it is obvious from the chart that the increase in mobile calls was much more significant.In conclusion, it is clear that the difference between the 3 represented categories of calls became less significant while the total number of minutes of telephone calls in the UK has increased.

Which would be better it this sentence? Thus, we must understand that economy only supports other crucial domains of the country population’s life. Or country's population life? Or country's population's life?

Guys please check this short IELTS writing exercise for grammar mistakes. N6 On the following table we can see that total number of visitors to the museum has increased with 18.000 per year in comparison with the year before refurbishment. The situation with regard to visitor satisfaction has also drastically changed. According to the results of the surveys, the percentage of "very satisfied" and "satisfied" visitors has increased with 20% and 10% respectively in the year after refurbishment. On the other hand, the number of "dissatisfied" people decreased by 35%. The number of visitors who were "very dissatisfied" also dropped from 10% to 5% and now is equal to the number of people who hasn't participated in the survey. As a conclusion, we can see that the refurbishment significantly affected the number of museum's visitors and their impressions in general. The most significant changes were observed in the number of "very satisfied" and "dissatisfied" categories of visitors.

Guys please check this short IELTS writing exercise for grammar mistakes. N5 Learning a foreign language is a long and hard process. Having a certain goal in mind, be that new work opportunities of the opportunities to hold a conversation while travelling must be the biggest motivator. These kind of goals help to ensure decent life and confidence. When you are provided with a new workplace abroad or have a possibility to travel to a foreign country those reasons will help to build your stability, success and social status. Humans are all social beings and, being a part of a social group fulfills our moral satisfaction and our need in others’ support. It could be argued that learning foreign languages for these purposes only may be cynical, but they are usually the source of our intentions to learn one language or another. In truth, the reasons why people start learning other languages are countless. One of the most important is cultural development. As an old chinese expression goes: “You are as many times a human, as many languages you know.”Certainly it is true and the people who know more than one language tend to think “wider” and understand different points of view. Therefore it helps you not only in obtaining a job you need, but also in becoming a more interesting person, thus having more friends. For another example we can think of educational reasons, as educational system may drastically differ from the system in your country. You may also be able to get access to certain materials, that were unavailable to you before, such as books, movies and news. In conclusion, I think that everyone must set their own purposes, but make it wisely, considering all possibilities. Fortunately the reasons for learning a foreign may, indeed. be very different.