What do you think about Germany supermarket? Answer: I think supermarket and other shops is too early to close. The opening hour is until 8pm. It is very inconvenient. When we study later time, where should we go to for eating? I don’t say that all supermarket should open until 12pm. But some supermarket should open until that time. Do you know other expression and better phrase.? Please tell me. I want to really improve my English skill.

What’s the first impression to come to Munich? I couldn’t answer to this question more specific, so I write my answer. Everything is different. Particularly cityscape and architecture are very different. The architecture is very medieval and beautiful. They are very historical and artistic unlike Japan. I also like Japanese buildings. They’re modern and electronic buildings. You can feel advanced and developed living(society is better?). On the other hand, in Munich we can feel history. But, there is a little different than I thought (was expecting) I thought every European cityscape was medieval. Munich is more modern than I thought. Austria cityscape was the Europe cityscape that I imagined Do you know other expression and better phrase.? Please tell me. I want to really improve my English skill.

I cooked lasagna yesterday I cooked lasagna yesterday. It was first time I had cooked and eaten lasagna. In Japan, we don’t eat lasagna. It was easier to cook than I thought. Maybe I couldn’t cook well because I didn’t put in proper quantity of seasoning. I’d like to try to cook again. Following to recipe, I can cook better on next time. I hope to eat authentic lasagna in Italy.

Diary1 in Munich It has been a week since I came Munich. There was a considerable change in my mind from the first day of departure. Originally, I felt anxiety and loneliness before I came here because I was only person who went abroad to study and chose different future with my friends. In the day when I arrived, I’m really tired because my baggage was missing. 2nd day(29th October),I met with Jonny. It made me relax(weaken my loneliness).But, I heard that I can’t register residence registration. I can’t get visa without residence registration. I was so despaired because of missing baggage and house problem. I learned that Don’t be impatient and be optimistic when I’m panicked by heart In that day, I stayed at house where Japanese live in. 3rd day, I just was in home almost. I felt that it was important to spend well time when I was alone. Now, my life a little settle down. I like to go to university library. It is surprising for me that many people study even before semester is not started.

the writing part of toefl Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. following sentence is my answer Recently, there are many young adults prefer to live with their families. They can support each other by money and so on. Maybe it’s a real shape of the family. However, I agree young adults should be independence from their parents as soon as possible. I make this argument from following three perspective; they can spend much time what want to do, they can have faculty to live by themselves, and they can conceive importance of their families. First, young adults can spend much time what they want to do. For example, I have lived by myself for four years. When I lived with my family, my parents was so strict and pressed me to study. So,I didn’t have much time to do other things. But now, I can do want I want to do, playing the piano and playing tennis etc. it make my life more abundant. Second, they can become to live by themselves. Young adults who live with their families don’t need to do house work, like cleaning up room, cooking dinner. In other words, young adults who live by themselves need to do such a thing. Thought such a thing, they have ability to live by their hands anywhere. Actually, I lived in Sendai, which is very far from my hometown. And I could live by myself through experience. Third, they can conceive importance of their families. For instance, when I lived with my family, I couldn’t find importance of my parent’s support and help. However, when I was independence from my parent, I could feel importance of my parent. Therefore, I can appreciate for my parents and think highly of my parents. That’s why I argue that young adults should be independence from their parents as soon as possible.

the writing part of toefl to be responsible adults,children should learn to manage their own money at a young age following sentence is my answer Recently, the number of children who work in a part time job is increasing in my country, Japan. High school tuition is not cheap. And, university entrance fee is much expensive. While, there is a problem that students should do except working. I disagree with this statement. I make argument from following two perspectives; high school student can learn more much things through sports than a part time job, children can learn management of money by ordinary life. First, high school students should do club activity. Through a part time job, they can learn importance of money and hardness of earning money. However, what they can get through a part time job are not much. Because, we do just easy work in a part time job. In other words, they can learn a lot of thing from club activity and sports. For example, when I was a high school student, I belonged to tennis club. After school, we played tennis until 8pm. We played tennis very hard to enter biggest tournament. We often did quarrel because of hardness of practice, because of false and because of technique in tennis. Everyone saying what they thought directly helped us improve personality and technique of tennis. In addition, we learned importance of team sports. For the help of those experiences, I can understand different thought and make hard work in anything now. Second, parents can teach their children money from ordinary life. For instance, when I was an elementary school student, I was gave a bit of money by my parents. I bought some snacks and toys with my friends in market. I knew snacks that I often ate is how much. Moreover, I understood whether my parents permit me to use much money or not by comparing with him. I knew how much money is expensive for my family and also knew how much money is expensive for ordinary home. Such an experience tell me value of money and usage of money. That’s why I disagree with this statement from those three reasons.

the writing part of toefl ibt Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people living? the following sentence is my answer i don't intend to argue my opinion ,i just want my sentence to be checked. In these days, people in rich country can get food easier. It makes our economy better. But, it has opposite aspect. I think the answer is no. I make my argument from following two perspectives; poor people have damage, and farm industry in small country has decreased. First, people in rich countries can get a kind of food from other countries. So, we spend better life. However, poor people have damage for it. Poor people cannot eat enough food. it because of developed countries. for example,in my country, Japan,many food are imported from other asian countries. Japan buy a lot of food from them, but the prise is very cheap. They cannot earn enough money. Unfare trade is in there. economic gap between developing country and developed country is not be soluted. When all is said and done, importing food from developed countries sometimes have damage on poor people Second, in narrow countries like japan,britin farm industry have damage. Japan import so many foods from other countries, which cause japan not to be able to generate food by my itself. If war occurs, people in such countries cannot eat enough food. in addition, tradition way to grow vegetables up is lost. actually, farmer population in japan is decreasing and tradition way is lost, which is serious problem. Japan buy a lot of foods with cheap money from foreign countries. So ,it is difficult for farmers to earn enough money. Import make bad spiral. That’s why I don’t believe this change has improved the way people living

the writing part of toefl Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. next sentence is my answer I believe parents are the best teachers. I make this argument for two perspectives; children spending more time with parents than with school teachers, school teacher has a lot of students. First, teacher cannot supervise children well. In society, there are very dangerous for them. Children have suffered from drag, alcohol, and smoking. Teacher cannot defend them from those dangers. In other words, parents can focus on them children. So, they always can supervise children. For example, when I was junior high school student, some student broke a rule. Teacher could not supervise them perfectly. In addition, their parents could not take care of children’s behavior. However, my parents always supervised me and taught me what is bad to do. For my parent’s help, I also could defend from those dangerous by myself. Second, teacher cannot take care of all students very well. They are professional about teaching subjects. But since there are so many students, they cannot focus on student who don’t understand class. Their parents should teach their children about subjects they cannot understand. For instance, in my childhood, my parents often taught me math and Japanese. I was not good at Japanese. I could not follow my Japanese class. My parents helped me improve my Japanese. Now, I major in Japanese history in my university. While, my friends could not take good score in math. His parents worked hard and didn’t teach him math. In result, he could not go to high school that he wanted to go to In conclusion, I think parents are the best teachers for those three reasons.

the writing part of toefl Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment –doing things they like to do –rather than doing things they should do. next sentence is my answer. We have a lot of things we should do, like job. And children also have what they should do, like homework. Such things base on our life. But, is it most important in our life? The answer is no. I think that people had better spend too much time personal enjoyment rather than doing things they should do. I make this agreement from following two perspectives; life aspect ,and educational aspect First, some people work in company for their hobbies. They spend much time on their hobby. Hobby is very fun and they live for fun. For example, my father like to drive a car. He sometimes spend much time on driving a car rather than working job. He said that he work job for family and his hobby. In addition, his hobby is motivation for work.in result, spending more time on personal enjoyment make our life more fun. Second, going out with friends is more important than doing homework for children. Thought homework, children can get many knowledge.Fundamental knowledge is very important in future. however, going out with friends tell him relationship between them and how to spend time with others. they help them improve their personality.To grow them up as person is very important for children. If a parent press their son to do many homework, he can’t study about relationship and he will be in trouble in future. That’s why I agree this thought.