I know these sentences are likely to be wrong, could you please help me correct them? Apart from professional studies, I learned English by myself systematically. As it is my inborn curiosity of how a computer works and love for collecting up-to-date development in the IT field, I chose to study Computer Science. In the work, I pay great attention to the accumulation of hands-on capacity and practical experience. My school courses enabled me with scientific research ability and reasonable professional knowledge structure.

Are there something wrong with these sentences? Are there something wrong with these sentences? Please help me, thanks~~ "I found this is a very practical technology, as well as provides greater profits for IT companies. " "Benefited from my frequent touch with English, I got good grades" "As the member of Oral English Society, I watch English films without subtitles and make imitate dubbing as well." "I read English journals to achieve the newest research outcomes." "There is no end in learning of academic knowledge." "My experiences offer me full confidence for studying"

I write a passage for this topic: Describe a time that you were waiting for something I can still remember when I was in preschool,there was a time I spent half a day waiting for my father to pick me up in the classroom with no one else.No teachers and no students,just me.That day my father dropped me at the school gate and left as usual.But then I found the door of classroom was locked, a guardian ,who saw me hovering there let me into the classroom and told me there was a special situation and that day was a holiday. And I must wait until my father pick me up.Most time in a daze and I really waited until that time like a stupid. Maybe you want to know why everyone but me knows that day was off school.Actually I was unwilling to go to school at that time.And the day before it ,I just cried and refused to go to school,so absolutely I had no idea my preschool would had a day off.I didn’t remember how I felt about it at that time but I find it very funny today.

Why do some people like collecting things? In my opinion, people can gain a strong sense of fulfillment during the process of collecting. They make an effort to get a complete collection of things, a process which requires considerable patience. It can be a memorial for collector as well. My mother used to collecting stamps at her twenties, and when she open her stamp albums now, she could recall her memory of the best times.