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November rain There were a few weeks raining without stop. Not this kind of rain strong and fast which hurts you and makes the soil run downhill, but this soft and tender rain, nearly inaudible by the hears, nearly unnoticeable by the skin, nearly indistinguishable by the eyes which, saturating as the roofs as the ground, shows conceal shimmers up at all the extant things. The whole colour spectrum was melted into the grey scale, all the colours save greens. Have I ever dreamed with such sundry of greens? Absolutely not, but they were just there, so nuanced, shinning brightly for me… The silence would was oppressive if there has not been by the gurgling scuttlebutt of the water bouncing down freely by the middle of the pebble street. Whatever I wanted find the river, I methought a great idea to follow the stream. I was unable to shake completely out the squeamish feeling of be walking through a ghost hamlet: no people, neither animals were seen. Suddenly my breath held on. Disclosed by the last torque in the path a stone stairway rose up before me, leading to nowhere. Skeleton winter trees grew enormous and wild on the right, bowing over the stairway as if they wanted reach the other side which was riddled with mossy debris and weeds. The sparkly water jumped happily singing step by step. The autumn’s scent emanated from the ground, enveloping and transporting me to another world. If a fairy would has flown between the branches I was not surprised! A sweet taste flooded my mouth, and at that very moment I understood that I was in love, that I would live and die in this village.
4 ตุลาคม 2017
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About the rain. There were a few weeks raining without stop. Not this kind of rain strong and fast which hurts you and make the soil run down the hill, but this soft and tender rain, nearly inaudible by the hears, nearly unnoticeable by the skin, nearly indistinguishable by the eyes which soddens as the roofs as the ground and shows up shimmers, that you couldn’t know existing, on all the things. Note: This is the start of a more long text, it is a bit poetic. Thank you so much in advance for yours corrections and over all, for yours comments.
3 ตุลาคม 2017
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Participle clauses. Reading about participle clauses I realize that I don't understand it, but this is not the worst. I think that it is pefectly possible use a grammar principle without understand it: don't rumiating about how we talk, each speaker of a language do it all the time. My real problem concerns to the fact that I don't know use correctly the participle clauses. In this very few lines I tried to use them properly. Do I achieve it? I don't know. How do you think about? Thanks in advance for your corrections and your eventually explanations of it.
20 กันยายน 2017
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How many time do you spend in an correction? Since I joined Italki I love correct Spanish notebook entries, because seing the mistakes that have been done to the forein learnings of Spanish I can undertand better some mental processes of the meaning distribution on the different ideas, and this is very worth to me. It is frequent that I think "I'm going to correct this quickly and I'll do... (another thing)" But this "quickly" seldom is less than a half an hour, in fact mostly is more if the entry has a certain length. This happen only to me or is this common to you too? Well, As I usually express dreadfully complex thoughts I'll write bellow the Spanish translation (for desambigation). Tips to improve the expresion are welcome. Thank you! ¿Cuánto tiempo gastas en una corrección? Desde que me uní a Italki me encanta corregir entradas en español del cuaderno, porque al ver los errores que cometen los estudiantes extranjeros de español puedo comprender mejor algunos procesos mentales de la distribución del significado en los distintos pensamientos, y esto es muy valioso para mí. Con frecuencia pienso "voy a corregir esto rápido y voy a hacer... (otra cosa)" pero este "rápido" rara vez es menos de media hora, de hecho, casi siempre es más si la entrada tiene una cierta extensión. Esto ¿me pasa sólo a mí, o es común también para vosotros? Bueno, como normalmente expreso de pena los pensamientos complejos, voy a escribir debajo la traducción española (para desambiguar) Los consejos para mejorar la expresión son bienvenidos. ¡Gracias!
22 สิงหาคม 2017
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Songs and Tantrix. One of my duties at my work is attempt to keep an elderly lady's mental abilities as fresh as possible. She has a certain degree of senile dementia, but the most of the time she seems normal. Usually I play with her to games as memories or double, she loves play cards, and in the last week I presented to her the Tantrix match which is similar to a puzzle, but is not a puzzle. She enjoys and I like to think that it works (a little at least) But the cardinal point in the process consists in keeping her socials relations, her friends. The other day she had been at a birthday party. They played cards (which is universal), ate cake and drinked hot chocolat, but over all they sang old songs. In a first impression this songs seem a bit childish, but all of them have a covert meaning, mostly with sexual content. It was funny to learn and sing these songs with them. In a deeper plumb of these songs, which apprise true facts, I could discover a very hard life, in a very machist society, that had been overcome with friendship, mutual aid, large doses of humor's sense and with immesurable strength. All this octogenaries ladies are strong survivors of a very gloomy time. I have the privilegy to be in touch with them!
15 สิงหาคม 2017
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I hate my exboss Yesterday, when I went to the bar to pick up the elderly lady who I look after, my former boss was also in the bar. When I worked to him, he wanted me to do a lot of things -much of them I was never told to do- but he didn't know how these things must be done. For example, he put all the papers the winery ever produced inside two big carton boxes and said me "archieve it", "How?" I demanded, "Just archieve it" was his repost. In other occasion he made me a great reprimand because I saw there was some drinks off of date, but there was my first week in the coffe shop (I was hired to the winery, not to the coffe shop) and the drinks were off date since six months ago (six months!). But our first serious argument was when he phoned me at eleven in the night, in my free day to ask me to tell some data that I have mailing him two days before. According to him, as he was the boss, he had the right to do it. When I became ill, partially because he deny me a heater in my workpost at winter, he called me again to tell me that I will be fired if I tooke a sick leave. As I had a double sciatica and I was unable to move myself, he wanted I toke my holydays and the extra-hours which he owed me (more than a month). As I said "no" he sended me off, allegating that I was an inept, I didn't come at job and I had a lack of adaptation. I wonder how he dared to say me "hello" yesterday.
14 สิงหาคม 2017
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Today I'm feeling a little apathetic. Usually I don't work at Sunday, but the daughter of the elder lady who I look after of is on hollidays, so I had to stay. I will be free days in reparation to these days. However This Friday they call me from my children school (which is abnormal, because by now is the summer hollidays) because my oldest daughter has win a contest whose she was inscribed at fallen. The award ceremony was today in other village (we live in a mountain system with very few town, only little villages) so, I was no abailable to assit! I addiction, some people remained bellow my bedroom's window speaking in laud voice until three o'clok in the night, so I cannot sleep properly. As today was Sunday They are expected to me for cocking something special, and the elder lady (her husband normally doesn't care) would like "paella". Really I make delicious paellas, but I abhor them, because I detest the seafrood, the smell make me shick! In the apex of all my calamities I have had an argument with the elder lady, because after of the paella she want some cheese, but she is not allowed to eat cheese because the salt. Now I will try to rest a little before both of them (the elder lady and her husband) get up from their nap. I'll suppouse the evening will be better!
13 สิงหาคม 2017
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Two thoughts about English path. While I have been reading in English I notice a pretty sundry of things about English tongue, and however I must to improve my skill of expresing complex thoughts I am goin to try explaining two of them: The first one: English is a positive language. There exist a bold tendence to expres the verb in its positive manner and after do the negation in the object (e.g. "There is no room for it" instead "there isn't room for it") The second thought is related with the first but more difficult to explain: English penchants to make the qualities of the things intrinsecal to the beings, not as an agregations belonging to them. I know, this is a confuse concept, I try to explain it better with an example: In Spanish to inform to my age I say "I HAVE thirty seven years old" the years "belonging" to me but are not me. Meanwhile in English I say "I am thirty seven years old" I AM (among other many things) a thirty-seven-years-being, thus I am an integrated being, no a multifractious one! Well, as I told before, I know that I have tendency to oscure writing, hence comments will be really wellcomen! (Thank you)
12 สิงหาคม 2017
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I've had been feeling sleepy There was some days ago that I sleep a lot. I used to sleep beetwen five to seven hours per night, but these days I had been sleeping more than seven! It didn't matter, I was feeling tired and my eyes were closing theirselves all the time... Perhaps if I would have anything interesting to do, I will be feel awake and happier... I think that to have aims to acomplish helps to have a salutary life. Well, today this is all. I continuous studying English. I wonder if sometime I will reach it!
10 สิงหาคม 2017
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Surprise visit The last Sunday my mother phoned to inform me she was comming at my home, but I was not at home, but on travel, so she had to return at home of her. She would not came since May. A few weeks ago I asked her to take up my two little children on the first week of August, because now I work 24h per day, five day per week taking care of an elder lady, my husband has also a job and he starts at 7:00 am. As the summer school starts at 10:00 am my elder daughter gets up the two little children but... She will be on a summer camp in the first week of August. As my mother didn't answer my request I found another solution and the children go to sleep at a friend's home. Today, when my children were yet in the friend's home to sleep (and my husband was in the next village garage to change the wheels of the pickup) my mother called me again to tell me she was comming, and she should arrive in half hour... She was very surprised because nobody were at home, and she was a little upset because her granddaughter was in the summer camp, in fact she can hard believe it when she read again the old whatsapp message where I said her all about. Really, sometimes I wonder what has my mother's head in!
2 สิงหาคม 2017
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