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Composition about wrtiing a thankful letter
In the story , Secretary of War Edwin M.Stanton wrote Mrs Van Metre a letter to thank her for helping a wounded Union solider out of danger. Suppose you were Stanton. Write a letter of thanks to Mrs Van Metre. You are required to include the following expressions in your letter;
Receive a report of the assistance
Act of kindness
Example of courage and unselfish giving
Moved by the report
Do the right thing
An expression of one’s gratitude
Repay one’s kindness
Order the immediate release of
Hope that the present slaughter will end soon
Dear Bettie,
We’ve received a report of the assistance about your husband situation written by Henry Bedell. It’s our honor to hear the gallant story about you. We feel deeply grateful that you risked the life of your own to bring an damaged solider through within the area of Confederate Union.
Moreover, We’re moved by the report that you had been caring for Bedell just as a professional responsible nurse looks after a wounded solider disregarding your precious live to spur towards Union headquarters conunted every second to fetch something essential drugs to save wounded Bedell from the death. You did the right thing that after he was cure you again carried Bedell back all the way in spite of danger. The brave action and unselfish giving is great and appreciated.
To express our gratitude and repay your kindness, we decide to order the immediate release of your husband and hope you will reunite together as soon as possible.
At the same tine, we hope that the present slaughter between the Federal Union and Confederate Union will end soon and achieve perpetual peace!
With best wishes!
Sincerely
Edwin M. Stanton
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Who can help me with my arrangement to the homework as following?
Arrange the following sentences in logical order so that they form a coherent piece:
1. One night he went out for a walk alone.
2.The man was nearly out of sight when the Frenchman found that his watch was gone.
3.A Frenchman had arrived at a small Italian town and was staying with his wife at the best hotel there.
4.He thought it was the Italian who had taken his watch.
5.The Frenchman threatened the Italian with his fist and pointed to his watch-pocket.
6.When he returned to the hotel the Frenchman told his wife what had happened.
7.Suddenly he saw a young Italian hurrying past him.
8.He decided to follow him.
9.In the end the puzzled Italian was forced to give up his watch to the Frenchman.
10.Now he realized that by mistake he had robbed the Italian of his watch.
11.Soon the Frenchman caught up with the Italian.
12.He was greatly surprised when his wife pointed to the watch on the table.
13.Neither of them understood the other’s language.
My sequence is: 3-1-7-2-4-8-11-5-13-9-6-12-13
Is my key to the sequence is right? Thanks............
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Composition
Part A
You've just moved into a neighborhood where you find the current public transport is inadequate,and so you want a new bus line opened to solve the problem.
Write a letter to the bus company,
1. making a request for a new bus line;
2. stating the reasons for your request;
3. expressing your eagerness for solution
You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your email, Use " Wang Lin" instead. You do not need to write the address.
To whom it may concern:
I am a new register that just move into the neighbourhood for a month, but it's a pity that
I find public teansport near my neighborhood seems very inadequate. For catch up the bus to my working time, I've got to get up early
in the morning lest I would be left behind because people are too crowd during the rush hour, what's more, it is not convenient to get up at that time.
I hope you can add sevral more bus to
release the jam of passengers, or open a new bus line to supply the short which the phenomenon exists.
Faithfully
Wang Lin
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compisition writing
Part B
Look at the picture below and write an essay of about 120 words making reference to the following two points:
1. a description of the picture
2. your suggestion on how to protect consumers' rights.
We can get a information from the picture llisted above quickly that both the man and the woman belongs to victims, they suffer a hurt from forged inferior products, the man on the left picture was complaining that buttons of the new shirt he's bought for 3days dropped of sudden while another woman on the right side of the picture conplaining that the one heel of the high heel shoes she's just purchased dropped.
Such a unpleasant shopping experience reminds me that maybe there exists two reasons bring about the consequence, first, some illegal manufactures take advange of some famous companies' brands and name to copy its models and then wrapped them as famous manufacture's to sell in the market, so when victims try to keep their legal rights, the response to the formal manufacture like this "Sorry, it's not manufactured by our factory".
The second reason owes to some irresbonsible workets at facotories work in a casual way during producing goods at their workplace.
So, to keep our consumers' right, first we should have some certain legal awareness in case our rights are offended so that we can report the case to the business administration department, seondly we should master and accelerate some common senses according to the characteristic of productions from famous formal manufacters so as to identify if it's forged ones. Thirdly, we can go to the local shop to ask for changing a better one or return goods. In addition, we had better purchase them from exclusive shop appointed by official websites or formal producers.
29 เมษายน 2015
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Composition
Look at the picture below. Think about it and write a 120-word essay on it. In your essay, you should
(1) Describe the scene in the classroom;
(2) Explain why the pupils are tired of the teaching.
This picture appearantly displays a less lively class, many students sitting at the study desk seemed to lack of the spirit for study. Some students in the picture looking down their books with a absent-minded way while others are trying to smell flowers.
The caution to arise maybe can come to many conclutions . First, maybe the teacher is not so excellent enough with a dull lecture that students are tired of that. Second, maybe never lots of students have interestin study, some of them even think study cannot be the necessary factor to their future job, and the personal ability is just the decisive one, a perfect student in grade is not able to represent his good behavior in his future job, for there are lots of people who aren't thre expert in study get a great achievement in our real life and on the other hand, some top students seem poorer and less successful than the former. Third, most of knowledges to the subjects lessly at schools put into practice for their future careers, possibly except PC and professional skills and knowledges are valued.In my opition, solely relying on ability by neglecting study to achieve success couldn't be the necessary character, both of them are ctitical importace as well, if we simply ignore study from school, numerous difficulties would happen to us in our future working that would hinder the national development and scientific progress, even will affect a state's power.
28 เมษายน 2015
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E-mail has improved people's life in the modern world
Email, electronic mail, is a product of modern technology. Nowadays ,more and more people are exchanging a great variey of information by using his high-tech commnunications tool, instead of traditional way of mailing letters. Some people think that e-mail makes relationships among people closer, while some other maintain that it makes people drift apart.
E-mail, a new invention of product in modern technology, it was born in 20th century which has been changing people's life greatly constrast to traditional way.
In ancient time, people had to wait serveral months or even more than a year to receive or deliver their letters since the transportation seems not very advanced, then as the invention of steam engine came out in the world has largely reduced the delivery time , but it had to take serveal weeks or months to get opposite sites' hands with expensive fees.
Now as the development of science, network , which is one of the most invention in 20th century has greatly narrow the time to communication and cut lots of costs, e-mail is one of the invention to the network technologies, you can write your letters by your computer to contact with your friends, family and so on with easy operation to complete the process within serveral seconds. Then you can write some blessing sentences to other people with vivid cartoon characters or beautiful pictures, besides that, you can also upload some of your favourite music or movies to share.
So, Email has improve people's daily life and makes their relationship closer , a frequent communication could be maintained every day for some people drift apart in the distant without considering a long time or any postage.
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Who can help me to correct my composition?
Combine the following into a 12-sentence paragraph, using the writing skills you have learned in this book:
1. I was young.
I had a very bad temper.
2. I did something once.
I am now very ashamed of that.
3. Tom was my older sister’s finance.
Every week my sister bought cigarettes for Tom.
My sister kept the cigarettes in a drawer in her bedroom.
4. It happened one day.
I had a quarrel with my sister.
5. My mother was out.
My father was out.
My sister was looking after me.
6. I wanted to stay up.
I wanted to watch television.
My sister insisted that I go to bed.
7. I became very angry.
I went to her bedroom with a pair of scissors.
I cut all the cigarettes into small pieces.
8. My sister discovered what I had done.
My sister burst out crying.
9. My parents came home.
My sister told them what I had done.
10. My father asked me a question.
“Is your sister telling the truth” ?
11. I could not deny the fact.
I had cut up the cigarettes.
12. I was severely punished.
I did not get any more pocket money.
I got pocket money again only after I had paid for the cigarettes.
Mine: I was young with a very bad temper. I did something once that now I was very ashamed. Every week, my sister bought cigarettes which kept in a drawer in her bedroom for Tom, a finance of her. It happened one day that I had quarrel with my sister when my mother and father was out.. I wanted to stay up to watch the television while my sister insisted that I should go to bed, then I became very angry and went to her bedroom cutting all the cigarettes into small pieces with a pair of scissors. My sister discovered my done and burst out crying. After that my sister told what I had done when parents came home. “ Is your sister telling the truth?” Asked my father,\I could not deny cutting up the cigarettes. Finally, I was severely punished by not getting pocket money any more unless I had paid for the cigarettes.
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Composition
Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible in developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with?
Write a compositiion of 160-200 words based on the following outline;
(1) state your opinion
(2) explain why
(3) conclusion
Some people think that governments should spend lots of money in developing or buying computer technology, But other people don’t approval that. I agree with fomal one. Fort these people hold this opinion seem reasonable that put money into developing could enhance the growth of the state’s economy and accelerate revenue. Then it’s reasonable for governments to take advantage of its revenue to strengthen its urban construction and influence for attracting more foreign investments and obtain more income.
As for the view supported by buying computer technology, it makes sense in some way. People are being integrated with informatization world because of the more and more advanced science technologies. Many people begin to realize it would be obsolete if they fail to catch up with the step to the world. To introduce computer technologies can not only get our works more easy but also accelerate developing for this aspect by ourselves.
But other people disagree the above two ideas because they feel money should be spent on more basic needs. There is still plenty of people cannot afford its tuition for education and even being starvation position in some developing countries and undeveloped countries. On the other hand, the expensive medical fees in these countries made most of these people hardly to shoulder and have to endure great hurt and pang.
In general, all of these are available to accept and understand. But the most crucial causes and decision depend on its governments!
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Composition!
In recent years, the correspondence of more and more people being printed out instead of being written out by hand, Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Write an essay of 160-200 words on this and make your points of view clear.
In your essay, you should
1) State your opinion and
2) Give your reasons
Now as the scientific technologies in modern times are being more and more advanced, lots of white collars(include ourselves) in the office don’t need write an file all by themselves with exhausted strength to accomplish a task for the computer printers available.
Yes, I have to admit that we have been got rid of the traditional, heavy, dull work. It seems more convenient to sign your name or fill some or words by pencil onto the printed file solving the problem. Then it’s more clear and obvious to let people browse the contents listed onto these people with no messy words needed to recognize, all of these printed files could be edited by some softwares such as the most common ones: word、excel、powerpoint and so on in a convenient and faster way.
But if it is solely attached importance to the convenience brought by science, more or less tricky problem would be caused, first it seems less humanized, second, some college students with high intelligence can not write a complete sentences and even come out wrong words.
On the whole, I think to keep traditional writing style is also nice choice though the times has changed, often practice writing words by your hand would improve the level for handwriting, beside this, it can also save our traditional culture and inherit this to our next generation!
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A Day Without Ads
Write a composition on the topic “A Day Without Ads”. Your composition should be no less than 150 words. Remember to write neatly. Use your imagination.
If there is a day without ads, how will be the world and our life? I think people could finish watching a movie or a soap from television or network smoothly without a break for ads for 1 to 15 minutes. On the other hand, almost every program will be televised one by one, we won’t be attracted or cheated by all kinds of useless commercial advertisement except public service advertisings. Then most of people would purchase their traditional famous brand goods with few interests to unknown new brand merchandise, and less famous brand goods need much more time to improve their qualities and practical uses to be famous one gradually in the future.
Besides this aspect, people will not be attracted by lots of ads such as shopping mall,streets and so on when they walk out, and then the stream to the supermarket or shopping mall would become less crowdy and attractive, the income to these commercial institutions and revenue to governments would drop relatively.
As for me, public places and other media institutions should publicize more public service advertising everywhere to reduce people’s daily bad habits for preventing crime and encourage people work on good deeds, that’s all my opinions!
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