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Essay
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In your English class you have been talking about life in the past. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Life is better today than it was 100 years ago. Do you agree?
Notes
Write about:
1. health
2. entertainment
3 ... your own idea
I agree with the statement that life is better today that it was 100 years ago. There have been any improvements in different areas, but mainly in health, entertainment and technology.
Firstly, we can see a progress in the field of health, for instance today, exist campaigns and a lot of information about relevant illness like VIH, obesity, depression, etc., which before our ancestors could not speak due to certain taboos. In fact, money and time are invested in research about these diseases and treatments that allow the improvement and maintenance of good health in humans.
Secondly, with the born of the Internet people can entertainment easily, because now they have access to different kind of programmes in comparison with the past, such as TV series of other countries, past programmes or countless videos. Besides
the use of the internet is increased due to the number of devices through which everybody access is made to it.
To sum up, the times have changed and the technology have influenced in improve the quality of the life of the humans for example in areas of healthy and entertainment
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Essay about Smart clothes
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Nowadays, many companies request employees to wear smart clothes. Some people think this is unnecessary, perhaps because they consider other aspects more important.
Firstly, in some jobs as office or a bank, employees must dress up because they are dealing with customers. On the whole, people prefer to keep in contact with a person with a good image in this kind of job as the presentation conveys a degree of seriousness, trustworthy and a good attitude for them. In fact, the first impression is very important because the dress code has a high impact on it.
The clothes that usually employees wear if they are man is an elegant suit with a tie, but if they are women wear a dress and both of them put on smart shoes.
Neverthelesess, in others jobs like a gym we see the trainers wear sports dress it. Is clear that although they have contact with people they do not need to wear a smart clothes.
Finally, using smart clothes depends on the kind of job and environment, as mentioned above in some jobs is needless.
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Survive without smartphone
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Imagine you had live for a week without a technological device you use
in your daily file. Choose a device and make notes about what the
experience might be like. Write an article about it.
Survive without smartphone
How would you feel if you had to live without using your smartphone? I'm a passionate girl of technology. However, I decide saved my phone in a box and not use it for a one week.
The first thing I usually do in the mornings is to check the time and listen to music to start my day motivated but, in this occasion, I woke up and went to run to the park near to my house. I realized that had time to do exercise instead of spend a lot of time checking social networks.
Then, I know that the idea wasn't terrible. In fact, I remember that I was looking for a cafeteria. Inevitably, I asked the location to stranger people, I was keeping touch with humans and this was a new experience because I'm not a sociable girl.
Afterwards, I missed my family so I called them by a public telephone and expressed my feelings to them and no through a text message like before. For me, it was a emotived moment.
All in all, I would tell you more experiences but, finally I had noted that can survive without a smartphone and do things benefits like dedicated time for me and like keep in contact with real people.
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