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Would you tell me these sentences are correct or wrong?
I've applied to the immigration to renew my passport. Is it ready to come back to me now ?
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Would you please check my today's second journal?
I've requested to renew my visa to my language school. I tried to ask the receptionist that my passport is already ready to come back to me or not yet, but I wasn't able to ask her in English about it well. My mind went black. Somehow I told her. I felt sad because I wasn't able to speak English smoothly and some vocabularies such as "request" or "come back"weren't coming to my mind. I'm frustrated so I'm going to sleep early today. Sleeping is most relaxing way for me!
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Today's my journal
Would you please correct this ?
I had an appointment to meet a friend, but I was late to leave my house. She wanted to go back home because she was in after school. Probably she was tired, so we canceled our an appointment. I should've sterted to leave preparering my house early. One of my faults is to take time anything. I regretted very much. Of coarse I apologized her. She was kind, so she said that's no problem. We can meet another time. We made an another appointment tomorrow. I'll definitely be on time.
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My journal
Could you please correct this?
I had planned having lunch at the Italian restaurant with my friend. When I was going to our meeting point, it was pouring and horrible. After we met, my friend, she had brought me the restaurant which is her recommendation. We chose Canadian pancakes, two pizzas and Caprese. That was so delicious and the amount of meals are enough for us, so we didn't order desserts , but next time, if I go there, I'll order a tiramisu. I wanted to practice how to order in English at the restaurant. However I didn't need to talk too much and the waiters and waitresses seem wanted to take a break quickly. Some waiters were already took a break and were eating food because it was almost closed brunch time. We missed a time that to go to the restaurant. When we go there next time, we are going to check a time.
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I would like you correct my self introduction. Please look at this.
I'm Tomomi. I was born and raised in Nagasaki Japan. Nagasaki is in western Japan. I worked at a nursery school as a nursery school teacher. It requires a national qualification because that job has important responsibilities. Why I want to learn English, because the English teaching in Japan is gradually changing recently. The teaching English at school in Japan is not practical learning and it's boring even now. So, I thought I want even small children will be interested in English. I want to tell them that English is interesting.
Another reason is that I like traveling and watching movies especially Disney movies. If I understand English, I will be able to enjoy more than now. That's why I want to learn English. Thank you.
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II: Trip Plan
After shopping, we will go to The Sapporo Snow Festival. There are art works made of snow there. Also we can see them at night, because there are lit up. Then, we will go to the Japanese style hotel. We will stay there at night. The second day is these plans. After have breakfast at the hotel, we will go to the zoo. There are animals living in cold areas. We can see the animals that spend the winter, also we can see penguins' walk. After the zoo, we will have lunch at this city. Hokkaido is famous for its delicious seafoods. If you don't like seafoods, you can eat onther meals. For example, you can eat Jingiskan. It is a Japanese grilled mutton dish. I would be happy if you want to go to Japan. Thank you.
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I: Trip Plan
I thought about a plan to go to Hokkaido in Japan. Hokkaido is in northeast Japan. We will take by airplane from Malaysia to Hokkaido. It will take eight hours. We leave at night and arrive in the morning. During the trip, we use a rental bus, because it is useful for our trip. The first day is these plans. First, we will go to Niseko town, and we will play winter sports. This town is famous of to can play winter sports and activities such as ski, snowboarding, snow rafting and also we can ride on a snowmobile. After that, we will have lunch that is named Soba, and It is healthy. After lunch, we will go to the shopping mall.
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Memorable day
My memorable day is on eighth March 2015. I wached Cirque du Soleil performance for the first time. Do you know Cirque du Soleil? It is name of circus in a Canadian entertainment company. I went to go to my friend. That place is in Fukuoka Japan. I watched the show named “OVO”. It was so exciting and fantastic. When we bought the ticket, we couldn't choose a seats, so we didn't know where we will sit until get the tickets. However we were so lucky, because our seats were in front of the stage! Which seats do you think? It was here! (show picture) During the performance, I was always excited. The show was comical and awesome. There were many performances such as flying act, slackwire and trampoline wall. I felt that foot juggling was interesting, because their movements were always synchronized, so I couldn't take my eyes. The show was two hours but I felt it was over quickly. I was very happy to watch professional performances in front of me! The ticket is not cheap, but I want to watch a show of Cirque du Soleil again. That's my memorable day. Thank you.
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I will ask you.
Which one is the best ?
【Person who works at nursery school or daycare】
1. nursery teacher
2. nursery school teacher
3. teacher
I'm confused...
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I will ask you.
Which one is the best ?
【Person who work at nursery school or daycare】
1. nursery teacher
2. nursery school teacher
3. teacher
I'm confused...
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