Poems Hi folks. I like to write poems, in both french and english, and I mean to produce some in other languages I'm learning as well. But english isn't my mother language, and while using the poetic licence to create, I may sometimes produce phrases that would sound too odd to native ears. That's why I would like to share those poems with italki community. Not only would it help me have correction if need be, but it would also provide me with an audience interested in reading english, which is quite hard in my direct french environment. So feel free to read even if though interested you may not want or feel able to provide me with corrections or comments, or to comment without "correcting", etc. Before starting however, I'd like to warn that I do take some liberty with English language, and the aim isn't to correct everything as if it was basic writing, including my puns and so on, but to highlight everything that definitely doesn't sound "possible" in english. Thank you for your comprehension. :) Never ashore While by the evening thorough freeze Sunset is whistling through the trees There be a leaf at my window Leaving afar all of a sudden Follower of a fierce uncontrolled flow Drawn by an unknown burden How long's it been carried away ? How long's it been winging astray ? I feel this catch of hidden streams To be a miserable offsprig And that however free it seems It is but on hazard's rig Or would it be me whom I target ? There's on this glass but my reflect No less seasick while on the floor No less homesick on my bough And no less lost by the winds door I imagine to be a prow Octo and hexa syllabus verses (8/8/8/6/8/6), that is, 4 and 3 stressed (actually the count isn't there if we make the sum of stressed and unstressed, it's just about the stressed) Untitled At night In iced hall He meets a he Both playing role And he so then wonders Wether he is the original Or purhaps a reflect's reflect As a mere echo of the signal That banged at very very first Piercing the utter silence of all In the utmost everwhelming darkness Where everything deedily is to meet its final At night… (free structure) Thank you for your lecture !