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Ielts 13 t2 writing
The picture below is showing a master plan of City hospital in 2007 and in 2010,It's obviously that some rearrangement have been done during the 3 years.
In 2007 city hospital was located at the end of Hospital Road, surrounded by the Ring Road.At the south of the building façade, there was an intersection where Hospital Road was divided by the City Road. As for convenient of people going to see doctors ,6 bus stops were set at the two side the entrance .And behind of the bus stops on the right ,a place was used for car parking ,where staff and others' car was allowed to park.
And in 2010,the location of road was remained but two roundabouts, one replaced the previously intersection and another was built at the entrance to link the Ring Road. the parking area in 2007 now was only accessible for stuff cars. For public parking ,a new lager clearing was set at east of hospital, opening toward the Ring Road .In stead of bus stops ,station was much likely to solute troubles caused by the more and more crowded people in city, so this hospital had one with two roundabouts to access it at opposite side of previous site.
13 ธันวาคม 2019
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here are some writing i wish you would help me to check whether it's a right expression
it's like questions i asked for myself and i gave it answers
Q:i think youre looking forward to the architecture research .why it failed.
A:the research is that i go to the city where target buildings are sited,having a lose experience in personal
first,before reaching the first building in my list the tour was tiring as for a long distance to go.
second.That one we went for was closed in that day.We were in a not good mood and need feedback which was not given.that disappointed us.
And the third .I still believed my friend came back to this fild (we majored in architecture designing both.And he once had changed his job designing for other things for a short period of time)Because of his fancy to beautiful buildings.Then it turned out i was wrong.He seems unlikely to be in a mood to talk about fantastic architecture.
and most important reason is i didnot have a decent sleeping.for this research.i took a flight in 6 am.It's terrible sleeping at airport.
so i guess what result in this failure are the details you have no idea to dig out at very beginning.try harder next time
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here are some writing i wish you would help me to check whether it's a right expression
it's like a question i asked to myself and then i gave it an answer
Q:you thought previously it will be good to hang aroung for one day for behind the concert and one for after it.is that right?
A:my plan is to visit a number of building in the first day. turn out i was naive to think it would be a short journey.we came home much early.
not sure did i waste time at night.
and for the third day.i attempt to try a beer Burger thing. and i also wanna pay a visit to city library.this trip really suck.mostly thanks to sleepless night .and the not enjoyable beer.i got a little bit drunk.with the stomachache(thanks to wake up all night).it ruin half of daytime.
so in conclusion.if i make a plan like two days aside the one which matters .it probably is a bad idea
thanks for watching
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how to understand this sentence ?
everything you can prepare ahead of time will be that much less that you have to prepare when time comes
I can sense what it means , but if someone could make a familiar sentence, I can make a fully understand
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