Can you help me correct this sentence? Thank you! My job is up in the air. ( I mean I have no idea what to do in the future. )

Is this sentence correct? I'm a type of person who fear the freezing winter a lot.

Are these sentences correct？ Sometimes I'm quite pedantic--foucusing too much on details. So making plans will drive me crazy. For example, if I make plans to study English at 10:00 am, I will be angry that my plans broken by other things. Therefore, I feel better without making plans.

Can you help me correct this sentence? Thank you! Back then, I was a high school student under the great pressure since the college entrance examination is quite challenging for the majority of Chinese students.

How can I improve this sentence with more beautiful words? He was a very excellent singer. His vocie was unique, and he sang song with feelings.

render He rendered songs vividly with feelings. Is this sentence correct? Can “render” be used like this ?

asking the government to bear the cost of higher education I agree that the government pays such fees can lighten the burden of some students’ families. Some families have a low living standard because of the shortage of money. Paying learning fees by students must impose a burden on their families. If the government can pay for them, they might have opportunities to continue their study because some students will drop out of college due to poor family backgrounds. This action provides them a chance to learn more knowledge which can improve their career prospects.