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Lately I'm working on my art project 'The Green Hearted Dog (its Korean title is 녹색마음 녹구). This name is inspired by old Korean cartoon '하얀마음 백구'. 백구 is a common name for white jindo dogs, I assume 하얀마음 refers pure heart or good heart, whatever like that. This animation was so popular in my generation so there's also video games about that. So, 'The Green Hearted Dog' is about a character, dog head shaped something green whose green heart isn't identified as good nor evil. I made a comic book about that and some goods like ceramic objects.
Here's a short paragraph for my comic book. I'd appreciate if you could correct or give feedback for this texts. 🙇♀️ 제가 이상한 글을 쓰지 않도록 도와주세요..
A fictional game that may be made someday, The Green Hearted Dog(녹색마음 녹구). And I(can I omit 'I' here?🤔) present a comic book containing its concept art. 'The Green Hearted Dog' is a game where you can look around the world following the character Nokgu(녹구) who doesn't stand on this world but float and flow around. Whether it's inside your computer or your smartphone, a cute Nokgu will accompany you. In this aimless and adversityless(역경 없는?) world of 'the green hearted dog', you don't have to perform a difficult quests. Your Nokgu grows old here, collecting small things and creating ephemeral artworks. What you have to achieve in this world is up to you. It would be nice to find a new, leisurely hobby. You can read this comic book, imagining a peaceful life filled with small tasks and subtle joy.
I wanted to translate '세계에 발 붙이지 않은' that is metaphorical phrase of 'not clinging to the life/ world', 'some different way of being or conceiving in this world'. I'm not sure 'standing on this world' could convey this meaning.
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I'd appreciate if you correct my mistakes.🙇♀️
<Spida Cab>
Lately I was searching internet and I found out that there are many people asking help for strangers to kill insects in their house. Saying like 'Please catch this house centipede right now! it's crawling!', they would pay for it about 20,000 won.
For me, I can ignore such insect if it doesn't approach to me too close. But I admit that it's unpleasant to encounter such insects in my bedroom. Also, for some people, that situation must be a nightmare. Even though the insects are not really harmful for human, you might not welcome those uninvited visitors. What would you do in that situation? Is it necessary to kill those insects?
For the merciful solution, I suggest this autonomous robot, Spida Cab. It can help you deal with this situation effectively by yourself.
First, it can run as fast as spiders with its delicate and strong robot legs. And with its AI system, it can predict the direction of the insects going.
Second, with its vacuum system, it'll catch insects into the carrier. But don't worry, Spida Cab won't hurt or crush them in the carrier. It's a gentle robot so it'll just keep them for a while. It's up to you to release them or kill them. Or you can just navigate it with manual mode to guide insects into the corner of your room. And let them go away.
I believe that even if you're scared of such insects, you can be brave and merciful at the same time. Just hitting down them with thick cardboard isn't the best solution.
You don't need any chemical pesticides which can be harmful for both of human and insects, if you have this robot. Also, you'll feel better when you treat the wandering insects kindly, instead you clean the dead insects body and its liquid.
This is why I recommend you this, Spida Cab. I hope you have nice experience with this robot.
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Lately I saw a movie 'Samjin Company English Class' and I really enjoyed to see it. The movie is set in South Korea in the 1990s. It's not about learning English but about three women employees(and their colleagues) struggling to find out company's secrets related to wastewater spill accident. The acting was convincing and whole characters were interesting. This movie presents absurd korean company culture back then which is even worse in the 1990s and also the process how main characters deal with it. I liked that this movie illustrated it fun and encouraging way. I recommend you to see this movie
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I'm looking for language exchange partners to practice regularly. I'm currently focusing on writing English passages. Mainly it's for translating my comics or introducing my artworks on social medias(or website in the future). Since these kind of works would be consistent, I need to find one in need of similar help rather than I get one sided help from someone.
I posted some artworks with simple caption in English here👇
https://pictofolio.com/artist/jumuluckfurfur
I hope I can write longer and descriptive texts futher(without weird grammar mistakes!)
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How can I say 추모의 물결이 일다(wave of memorial?) in English?
When any famous person who has good reputation passed away, a lot of people feel sympathy and send prayers. In this situation, can I say 'there's a big wave of memorial/mourning in the society '? I translated a Korean expression, 추모의 물결이 일다. Is there any similar expression or proper translation in English?
한국에서는 사회적으로 명망있는 사람이 죽거나, 안타까운 사고로 많은 사람들이 죽었을때 '추모의 물결이 일어납니다.' 이 표현을 영어로 어떻게 번역할 수 있을까요?
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Caption for my drawing
I made a riso print and wrote its caption. If there's any errors or better expressions you can recommend to me, please correct this
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Tombstone of Alex the genius parrot.
The ready made garden stone is attached on the cement plinth. On the lower part, there inscribed his last words, "You be good. See you tomorrow, I love you." Since 2007 with memorial(추모의 물결?), it has been found from all over the world.
천재 앵무새 알렉스의 묘비
기성의 정원석에 시멘트 받침이 덧대어져 있다. 하단에 그의 유언 "You be good. See you tomorrow, I love you."이 새겨져 있다. 추모의 물결이 일었던 2007년 이후 세계 각지에서 발견되고 있다.
14 พฤษภาคม 2020
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Writing practice for my comics
I'm trying to translate my comics in English. It's about sleepy schooldays in 2000s Korea. I guess there are many grammar mistakes and unnatural phrases. I'd appreciate it if you point out any!
The title is 'sleepy story'. This comic is 5 pages long. I'll transcribe them one by one.
A diligent student of Doggyland, Dangdang.
A sunny and cozy spot, back of the classroom.
'I can't see the blackboard, but it's a nice place.'
World's culture
"...so, there is a such culture, called siesta."
'Oh, okay' <- indifferent reaction
'That kid is always dozing off and makes trouble. '
'It would be quite comfortable if there is a siesta.
It will never happen tobe scolded like that kid.'
"Are you gonna sleep when you are taking SAT(수능)?!"
*I can't find proper words for sound 탕탕, which is sound of knocking desk with wood stick.
'There's enough space for one dog to lie on the locker. Then, we can take a nap on there in order of mandatory volunteering points(점수 순서대로).
Or, is it too harsh to take turns in order of test score?'
Standing up to keep awaken until their turns come.
잘 부탁합니다🙇♀️
23 เมษายน 2020
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