Can you modify my sentences? Please **Experience I was taking leave of absence at University for six months. Indeed I wanted to have various social experiences. I had a variety of experiences through working part-time jobs such as extracurricular work teacher, a English teacher in academy, a soccer game staff, a children’s wear salesperson, etc. While I was working, I learned a lot of things. I grew up under my mother doing volunteer work at wives association and my father working in the department of Social Welfare. Therefore I have learned worth about volunteer work. I did a volunteer work with my friends at the orphanage ' Song AE Won 'in Busan. And I participated in the event making kimchi for an old man lived alone. That is the worthiest experience in the world. In my school life, I made an English conversation study group. It was too hard because I should lead other people. But it is a worthy experience to manage the club. On 2010, I participated a volunteer at Busan international short-film festival. **Oversea experiences After graduating the university, I attended the English language training in Australia and the Philippines. In the Philippines, I met many friends. Even though we have different nationality, language and the way of thinking, we came over the border line. In Australia, which the various race has been living in, I stayed in home stay accommodation. Every dinner time, I talked about the world issues with the Malaysian- Singaporean host and her English husband. I got a ‘Tesol’ certification in Australia. I had an experience which I taught students using English. The trip in Japan led me to change. After having a piece of map in Narita airport, I asked them how to get to the destination. All through the day, I met several tens of people. If they could not understand what I said, I explain using exaggerated gestures. I really enjoyed these challenges. These challenges make me strong. Even though I am a small person, I went with a suitcase, two handbags and a backpack in order to sleep in the guesthouse that is located apart from the city. And few days ago, I tripped at Vietnam and Thailand. Through these experiences, I realized that I can solve the problem for myself under any situations. The most memorable thing Since I was 10 years old, I have climbed the mountains with my family as hitch-hiking. (Gajisan , Soaksan, taebaeksan, Jirisan, wolchulsan, sinbulsan, youngchisan, geumjeongsan, wonhyosan, geumryeonsan,mayisan, gyeryongsan, deokyusan , etc.) The most memorable episode is in the Andong Hahoe Folk Village. It was a very cold winter. We should have moved to another destination. But there were no cars. So we trembled in the cold. At that time, fortunately the truck carried Jindo dog came to us. We rode the truck with Jindo dog. Even though it was too hard, it was a very interesting experience. The memory has been a part of my life. The patience has made me the person I am over the years.

Please modify my sentences ! Q.If you could compare yourself with any animal, which would it be and why? If I compared with an animal, I would closed to puppy. They are very familiar with human and always stay with them the moment when that people are sad or delight. They have outstanding ability when it comes to communication. I am also good consultant for my acquaintance. They sincerely treat for people. Instinctively they show their action according to their mind, sothey are not cheat someone. So people like them.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi everyone. My name is Lee Gahyun and I live in South Korea. I like traveling around the world and making friends who live in abroad. I visited the Philippines, Australia, Japan, Thailand, Vietnam. Also I have a plan to go to other places. If you want to know about me, please refer to the below You can see lots of pictures :) *facebook.com/fantasticwanderer *fantasticwanderer.tumblr.com *fantasticwanderer.blogspots.com *cyworld.com/sweetraveler