Hi! What made you choose to describe the weather as foggy? That sounds very unpleasant in English, and not like something especially enjoyable. I personally would recommend describing The weather more, specifically focusing on a more positive element of it. Maybe focus more on the temperature, in this case? Is that pleasant? Also, when you say sandys, do you mean sand or sand dunes? Sand dunes are tall hills of sand in the desert. Watch your punctuation- all city and country names must be capitalised. Also in English writing, all numbers that are smaller than ten must be written as words, not numbers when writing a text (eg. Two, not 2, but 15 can be written instead of fifteen). I put my corrections in capital letters above... hope this helps! 😊