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Eron Zuniga
Having relaxation is a must. We need to have a game changer adaptability avoid stress and that is by doing yoga, yoga is a kind of recreational activity that helps our body and mind ,in which it supports our mental and physical health in order for us to do work and do daily lives easier . Engaging into yoga support our immune system in a way that it releases toxin in our body , we can do it every morning for us to have a productive day to start it up by doing yoga .That's all have a great day ahead and do your yoga everday little doings can adapt and create bigger changes.
11 Thg 12 2024 19:14
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Having relaxation is a must. We need adaptability to avoid stress and we can achieve this by doing yoga. Yoga is a kind of recreational activity that helps our body and mind, in which it supports our mental and physical health in order for us to do work and live our daily lives more easily . Engaging in yoga supports our immune system in a way that releases toxins in our body. We can do it every morning and it will help us to have a productive day .That's all. Have a great day and do your yoga every day. Little actions can create big changes.
"Game changer" doesn't make sense in this context. Good job - - - don't string unrelated things togeter with a comma. Just start a new sentence.
12 tháng 12 năm 2024
Relaxing is a must. We need to employ some kind of game-changing tactic to avoid
stress and that could by doing yoga. Yoga is a type of recreational activity that
helps our body and mind, it supports our mental and physical health in
order for us to do work and live our daily lives better . Doing yoga supports
our immune system in a way that it releases toxins in our body , we can do it
every morning in order to have a productive day.
.That's all have a great day ahead and do your yoga every day: doing little things can
adapt and create bigger changes.
This is a great start, but I would suggest using more simple vocabulary and sentence structure to avoid confusion, rather than making your sentences too complicated, as it means the meaning becomes unclear and you repeat yourself a little. You could try to write simpler sentences and then explain in more detail before moving on to your next point. Simple language is often the most effective tool. Also, please be careful of what verbs you choose here: there are some rules for certain activities: for example, do yoga, take part in yoga classes, employ a tactic
12 tháng 12 năm 2024
Having relaxation is a must. We need to have a game changer adaptability avoid stress and that is by doing yoga, yoga is a kind of recreational activity that helps our body and mind ,in which it supports our mental and physical health in order for us to do work and do daily lives easier . Engaging into yoga support our immune system in a way that it releases toxin in our body , we can do it every morning for us to have a productive day to start it up by doing yoga .That's all have a great day ahead and do your yoga everyday little doings can adapt and create bigger changes.
11 tháng 12 năm 2024
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