Today, I met precious childhood friend for the first time in half a year. Her name is Risa. She and I have been best friend since we was in kindergarten. I consider she’s important to me in life. I li

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Today, I met precious childhood friend for the first time in half a year. Her name is Risa. She and I have been best friend since we was in kindergarten. I consider she’s important to me in life. I like the time which spend with her. I’d like to cherish her a whole lot.

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Today, I met my precious childhood friend for the first time in half a year. Her name is Risa. She and I have been best friends since we were in kindergarten. I consider her an important person in my life. I like spending time with her. I cherish her a whole lot.

11 tháng 3 năm 2023

Today, I met up with a precious childhood friend for the first time in half a year. Her name is Risa. We have been best friends since kindergarten. She’s very important to me, and I love spending time with her. I fondly cherish our friendship!

You did an amazing job, and everything you said was clear and conveyed your message adequately. I have simply added some phrasing suggestions and minor grammatical edits for you; keep up the great work!

11 tháng 3 năm 2023

Today, I met a precious childhood friend for the first time in half a year. Her name is Risa. She and I have been best friends since we were in kindergarten. She’s (very) important to me and I cherish the time I spend with her. I love her a whole lot.

There were words that didn't add anything or were redundant. Questions are welcomed 🙂 Good job!

11 tháng 3 năm 2023

Today, I met A precious childhood friend for the first time in half a year. Her name is Risa. She and I have been best FRIENDS since we WERE in kindergarten. I consider HER TO BE important in MY life. I like the time THAT WE SPEND TOGETHER. I’d cherish her a lot.

11 tháng 3 năm 2023