Could you please check if this writing is natural?

"Cherries have ripened too much and blueberries are wrinkled by having lost all moisture, so I didn't want to eat them 🤮 As a solution, I decided to make them as jelly. It took only 40mins. I had a productive lunch time. 😋
Cherries 700g, Blueberries 200g, Sugar 100g"

Question

Could you please check if this writing is natural?

"Cherries have ripened too much and blueberries are wrinkled by having lost all moisture, so I didn't want to eat them 🤮 As a solution, I decided to make them as jelly. It took only 40mins. I had a productive lunch time. 😋
Cherries 700g, Blueberries 200g, Sugar 100g"

Answer

You need to use the past tense: The cherries were overripe and the blueberries were wrinkled and had lost all moisture, so I didn't want to eat them. As a solution, I decided to make them into a jelly. It only took 40 mins. I had a productive lunch time. 😋
Cherries 700g, Blueberries 200g, Sugar 100g"