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This year's winter was mild in its coldness. That was an advantage to the houses that contain gardens. I cheer up whenever I visit my family's house when I look at the colourful flowers. They glow with bright colours and add life to the house. In addition to the positive energy that emerge of it.
25 Thg 02 2024 20:42
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Winter this year was mild/not very cold. This was good for houses with gardens. I feel more cheerful whenever I visit my family's house and look at the colourful flowers. They glow with bright colours and add life to the house. They also add to the positive energy that emerge from the house.
You hardly had any actual errors. I just tried to make it more natural.
26 tháng 2 năm 2024
This year's winter was mild, this is an advantage for the properties with gardens. I cheer up whenever I visit my family's house when I look at the colourful flowers. They glow with bright colours and add life to the house. This is in addition to the positive energy that emanates from it.
26 tháng 2 năm 2024
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