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Wendy
Are there any mistakes in this speech? Thanks.
Today, we come to this creative park filled with surprises. Jianyu Zhou, which just won the title of municipal cultural industrial Park. Looking down from the air by the Dongjiang River in Guancheng, this small island looks like a catfish, Therefore, it is called Jianyu zhou.
It was once a pioneer in Dongguan's industrialization. However, in the past decade, it has fallen into silence. After the transformation, JianYu Zhou is divided into three areas, exhibition area, creative area and cultural area. Even powerful brands such as Alibaba, Kelly Moss Art Museum, and Bear Design have settled here. It's also a fashion spot. There have been many IP exhibitions held here. Young people all like to come here.
Nowadays, with the continuous expansion of urban space and the encouraging development of cultural industries, Jianyu Zhou sends out new glory.
15 Thg 03 2024 13:43
Câu trả lời · 1
It's not wrong but it's not fluid as it could be. The tone reads like a news anchor to me. It's an interesting park. I would reword it just to be a little more natural.
15 tháng 3 năm 2024
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