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In Japan, trains are very crowded both in the morning and at night. Both students and office workers use the train to go to school and work, so it's crowded. I also take the train to go to college every day, but sometimes even if I want to get on, it's crowded and I can't get on. I'm interested in how much trains are used by people in overseas!!🚃
9 Thg 06 2025 10:06
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In Japan, trains are very crowded both in the morning and at night. Both
students and office workers use the train to go to school and work, so it's
crowded. I also take the train to go to college every day, but sometimes even if
I want to get on, it's crowded and I can't get on. I'm interested in how much
trains are used by people in overseas!!🚃
Hi! Great job with your writing. 🌟
Only a few corrections.
"I'm interested in how much
trains are used by people in overseas!!"
✅️ Correction:
"I'm interested in how much
trains are used by people overseas!!"
(No "in" when saying overseas)
📚 Synonyms for "crowded":
▫️Packed
▫️Full
▫️congested
I am from South Africa and we don't use trains for public transport in my country.
- Teacher Dani 🌷
9 Thg 06 2025 11:33
In Japan, trains are very crowded both in the morning and at night. Students and office workers commute by train, so they are crowded. I also take the train to go to college every day, but sometimes even if I want to get on, it's too crowded and I can't get on. I'm interested in how much trains are used by people abroad.
9 Thg 06 2025 12:38
In Japan, trains are very crowded both in the morning and at night. Both
students and office workers use the train to go to school and work, so it's
packed. I also take the train to go to college every day, but sometimes, even if
I want to get on. It's full, and I can't get on. I'm interested in how much
trains are used by people overseas!!🚃
9 Thg 06 2025 11:39
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