I'm an extrovert but I can sometimes be an introvert depending on who I'm with. I tend to talk a lot with people who I find perfect friendly to me.
I don't have a lot of friends. I'm a sixteen -year old girl but I feel as if I was over 20. I don't like going outside and hanging out with friends. Just stay at home and study English every day. One of my friends said that I'm boring. He might be right.
I study English to my heart's content. I never get bored cause it's my favourite subject. I have set out to achieve band 8.5 in IELTS. I've been making strenuous effort to fulfill my dream since I decided to do so.

Please correct me. I really appreciate 🩷

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I'm an extrovert but I can sometimes be an introvert depending on who I'm with. I tend to talk a lot with people who I find perfect friendly to me.
I don't have a lot of friends. I'm a sixteen -year old girl but I feel as if I was over 20. I don't like going outside and hanging out with friends. Just stay at home and study English every day. One of my friends said that I'm boring. He might be right.
I study English to my heart's content. I never get bored cause it's my favourite subject. I have set out to achieve band 8.5 in IELTS. I've been making strenuous effort to fulfill my dream since I decided to do so.

Please correct me. I really appreciate 🩷

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You did great! Couple minor correction here and there but you did fine in my eyes. I get the whole feeling older thing. One thing I will ask is that you try to broaden your studies. Being highly perceptive at your age will become an advantage. I say this cause you're already driven.

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Hello
Hope you are well
Happy to help you with your English language.
So let's talk.

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Great 👍

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