Sounds like it’s just salt!

Key Improvements & Why: 1. "Mistreated it" → "didn’t treat it properly" - "Mistreated" sounds too strong (like intentional harm). "Didn’t treat it properly" is more natural. 2. "Which led to what I thought was a typical infection" → "which led to what I thought was -just- a typical infection" - Adding "just" makes it sound more natural and conversational. 3. "Urged her to go to the clinic" → "insisted she go to the clinic" - "Insisted" is a bit stronger and more common in this context. 4. "The doctor laughed and said we were overreacting again, the second time this month" → "The doctor just laughed and said we were overreacting again—our second time this month." - "Just" makes the doctor’s reaction sound more casual. - The em dash (—) makes the sentence flow more naturally in speech. 5. "Sodium chloride physiological solution" → "saline solution" - "Saline solution" is the everyday term for this. 6. "I’m not sure what it means" → "I’m not exactly sure what that is" - This sounds more natural in casual conversation. 7. "Everything should be just fine" → "everything should be fine" - "Just fine" isn’t wrong, but "everything should be fine" is more natural. 8. "I can take care of it" → "I can handle it" - "Handle it" sounds more confident and conversational. Tip: Your writing is already great! Spoken English tends to be a little more relaxed and direct, so minor tweaks like contractions ("didn’t" instead of "did not") and natural phrasing ("I can handle it" instead of "I can take care of it") make a big difference. Keep it up!