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Uliana
Hey, guys! Now I'm preparing for exams in my future school and I need your help. The exam consists of writing an essay. Can you please point out errors in spelling, punctuation, use of tenses and other grammatical structures, and appropriateness of vocabulary. The exam requirements for the essay are that it be written in an official style, without abbreviations of colloquial vocabulary, etc.
My essay:
Homework given on holidays. What a controversial question! One part of people sure that schoolchildren should be given a homework on their holidays. But another part of people say it is not right and schoolchildren should relax on their holidays.
Let is think what motivates people to be sure that a home tasks should be given for students on holidays. They are think a studying is the main duty of every schoolchild, so a schoolchild must study even on vacation. Furthermore, if a schoolchildren will not be given a homework, they will have a lot of free time and they certainly will have bad habits, like smoking or drinking alcohol.
But people, who says a homework given on schoolchildren's holidays is not necessary thing, think that for productive studying schoolchildren need for full relaxation. They are also think that holidays are the best opportunity for meetings with friends, spending time with family, doing hobbies and travelings. For instance, I am fond of reading books. But on the studying period I have not got enough time to reading. So holidays are fantastic chance to do my favorite hobby.
Every point about homework on holidays is relevant because it has own reasons. As for me, I very like studying and getting new knowledges, but at the same time I have got a lot of another interests. So I think that on holidays schoolchildren should relax, do their hobbies and enjoy a life outside of school without any homework or with a little quantity of it.
6 Thg 10 2023 14:46
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