Yesterday, I was playing/played football in the morning. We won 6 to 1. We are in second place in the regular championship. After that, I had a fantastic breakfast with my friends. I asked for /ordered a croissant with cheese and cold meat, fresh orange juice and hot coffee. Great breakfast after playing football and taking a hot shower in the changing room. Later, I came back to Arroyomolinos to have lunch with my wife and daughter. We made soup and some warm pizzas which were leftovers from the day before yesterday from an Italian restaurant. I did a little laundry with the team clothes/kit and put them on luggage ruck carrier to prepare for the next trip. Meanwhile, my daughter and my wife were taking a long nap. We dressed and finally we went to Madrid to see a special concert for my daughter, Luly Pampin, who is a singer which usually sings songs for children. My daughter had a great time, although she fell asleep a bit late and she has woken up very early. She is watching cartoons right now, but we got up to have some breakfast. Well done. An ambitious and generally good piece of writing. I hope the corrections/changes can help you.