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Yesterday, I went to an amusement park in Kawasaki City with my younger sister. We took the train to get there. When we had to change trains, I told my sister that we were getting off, but I accidentally got off one station early. Because of that, we arrived a little late, but we still made it safely.The amusement park was very crowded, and most of the rides had a 60-minute wait. We rode a 360-degree spinning attraction and a bicycle ride. My sister ate two kinds of French fries. I ate a donut and takoyaki, and I drank strawberry milk. We were both really excited, and we talked a lot while walking around the park.When it got dark, the illumination lights were turned on. The colorful lights were really beautiful and made the atmosphere feel magical. On our way home, we rode the gondola. We could see the whole amusement park from it, and it was amazing. When I took a video, the inside of the gondola reflected on the window, which was a bit disappointing, but the sparkling lights were still very cute.It was a fun day, and spending time with my sister made it even better. Next time, I want to go somewhere different with her and make more memories.
7 Thg 12 2025 23:58
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Yesterday, I went to an amusement park in Kawasaki City with my younger sister. We took a train【★読み手/聞き手が「ああ、あれのことね」とわかってくれるものであればtheをつけますが、そうでなければtheはつけません】 to get there. When we had to change trains, I told my sister that we were getting off, but I accidentally got off one station early. Because of that, we arrived a little late, but we still made it safely.The amusement park was very crowded, and most of the rides had a 60-minute wait. We rode a 360-degree spinning attraction and a bicycle ride. My sister ate two kinds of French fries. I ate a donut and takoyaki, and drank strawberry milk. We were both really excited, and we talked a lot while walking around the park.When it got dark, the illumination lights were turned on. The colorful lights were really beautiful and made the atmosphere feel magical. On our way home, we rode the gondola. We could see the whole amusement park from it, and it was amazing. When I took a video, the inside of the gondola reflected on the window, which was a bit disappointing, but the sparkling lights were still very cute.It was a fun day, and spending time with my sister made it even better. Next time, I want to go somewhere different with her and make more memories.
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16 tháng 12 năm 2025
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