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Hello! Today I wrote about what place do you want to visit before you die. I want to visit three places before I die. First, I want to visit Yakushima in Japan. There is located in the Kyushu area and belong to kagoshima prefecture. There is a lot of nature and wild animals, especially it famous for jumon sugi. It says that the tree lives for about 2,000 years to 7,200 years also there is famous place as an original place of one of Ghibli movie ‘’Mononokehime’’. I love the movie, so I want to visit there and I feel the wild breathe of nature like the characters. Second, I want to visit Hokkaido. To be honest, I don't want the particular destination, but I want to see the start in Hokkaido before I die. When I was high school student, my clam school teacher went to there, and he showed me the picture of stars. It was very beautiful, so I want to see the star in Hokkaido. Finally, I want to visit Okinawa. There is famous and popular place in Japan, and a lot of people visit there. However, I have never been to there, so I want to visit. If I visit there, I want to swim in the sea and visit historic building. Therefore, I want to visit three places before I die. Thank you for watching my essey!
20 Thg 11 2023 10:33
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Hello! Today I wrote about what places I want to visit before I die. I want to visit three places before I die. First, I want to visit Yakushima in Japan. This is located in the Kyushu area and belongs to Kagoshima prefecture. There is a lot of nature and wild animals, especially it is famous for jumon sugi. It says that the tree lives for about 2,000 years to 7,200 years. Also, there is a famous place as an original place of one of Ghibli's movie ‘’Mononokehime’’. I love the movie, so I want to visit there and feel the wild breath of nature like the characters. Second, I want to visit Hokkaido. To be honest, there is no particular destination that I want to go to, but I want to see the stars in Hokkaido before I die. When I was a high school student, my clam school teacher went there, and he showed me the picture of stars. It was very beautiful, so I want to see the stars in Hokkaido. Finally, I want to visit Okinawa. There are famous and popular places, and a lot of people visit there. However, I have never been there, so I want to visit. If I visit there, I want to swim in the sea and visit historic building. In conclusion, I want to visit these three places, Yakushima・Hokkaido・Okinawa, before I die. Thank you for reading my essay!
Hello, I am Nami the assistant of this class. Nice writing! I would like to visit Yakushima too. My favorite Ghibli movie is "Mononokehime" too. I would like to go there and feel the nature. If you are writing an essay you have to have an introduction, 3 body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Each paragraph should be indented and have at least three sentences. If you follow this your essay will become more fabulous. At the end you put watching my essay, but it would be reading because the people who see this will be reading the essay.
28 tháng 11 năm 2023
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