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Today is a nice day, it's no rain, no hot feeling. I've been spending my all day at college to study by myself. Now, i'm being a coffee shop inside my college, having positive vibe here.
12 Thg 11 2020 10:46
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Today is a nice day, it's not raining, nor is it too hot. I've been spending my day at college studying by myself. Now, I'm at a coffee shop by my college,having a positive vibe.
Hey there, I changed your paragraph a little. I understood what you were trying to say. I am glad that you are having a good day and I hope to hear more of your good days sometime soon. Keep writing.
12 tháng 11 năm 2020
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Nội dung này vi phạm Các nguyên tắc Cộng đồng của chúng tôi.
12 tháng 11 năm 2020
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Today is a nice day because it's not raining and not too hot. I've been spending my day at school studying by myself. Now I’m at a coffee shop inside my college which has a positive vibe.
12 tháng 11 năm 2020
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Today is a nice day, it's no rain, no hot feeling. I've been spending my all day at college to study by myself. Now, i'm being a coffee shop inside my college, having positive vibe here.
This is how I would more so say this.
12 tháng 11 năm 2020
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Today is a nice day, it's not raining or feeling hot. I've been spending all my day at college studying by myself. Now, i'm at coffee shop inside my college, having positive vibe here.
12 tháng 11 năm 2020
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