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Actually i do use to travel alone, For my point of you , At that social media and phones age , it really hard to find some privet time . There is a big contradiction between the thing's we do need and the thing's we consume. In my opinion we should dedicate our self's to what really make our feel good, We should treat our time efficiency . Lone trip is a good way to take care of yourself .
21 Thg 12 2021 16:43
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Actually I used to travel alone. For my point of you , at this social media and phones age, it is really hard to find some private time. There is a big contradiction between the things we need and the things we consume. In my opinion, we should dedicate ourselves to what really makes us feel good. We should make our time more efficient. Therefore, taking a solo trip is a good way to take care of yourself.
Good job Malachi, your grammar is quite good, you just need to practice writing more so you'll be able to choose the right dictions and nuances.
2 tháng 2 năm 2022
Actually, i have traveled alone, From my point of view, in this social media and phone age, it is really hard to find any private time. There is a big contradiction between the things we need and the things we consume. In my opinion we should dedicate ourselves to what really makes us feel good, We should use our time efficiently. Travelling alone is a good way to take care of yourself .
21 tháng 12 năm 2021
Actually, I do travel alone. From my point of view, in this age of social media and phones, it's really hard to find some private time. There is a big contradiction between the things we need and the things we consume. In my opinion we should dedicate ourselves to what really make us feel good. We should use our time efficiently . Taking a trip alone is a good way to take care of yourself.
21 tháng 12 năm 2021
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