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Taku Kobayashi
I am practicing English writing.
Please, check this.
【Topic】
Today, some customers ask delivery companies to put packages by their doors instead of recieving them directly.
Do you think this kind of service will become more common in the future?
【My Answer】
I agree with the statement that some customers ask delivery companies to put packages by their doors instead of recieving them directly.
I have two reasons.
First of all this service is helpful for customers.
They have to wait at home for the packages to arrive.
If delivery companies could put packages by their entrance,they do not have to wait at home.
Second,the delivery campanies can reduce delivery costs.
If customers do not stay in their home, drivers need to go to the same house again.
For the reasons that I mentioned this service is going to mecome common in the future.
9 Thg 01 2024 14:33
Câu trả lời · 2
You weren't asked to agree or disagree with the premise. You were asked whether you think it will become more common in the future, not whether you think it happens now. It was presented as a fact.
9 tháng 1 năm 2024
Hello Taku,
Your English writing is excellent. Below are a few minor corrections:
I agree with the statement that some customers ask delivery companies to put packages by their doors instead of recieving them directly. ("Receiving" is a common spelling error. Remember, "i before e, except after c".)
I have two reasons. (You can use a period or a colon here.)
First of all this service is helpful for customers. (Place a comma after the phrase "First of all,...)
They have to wait at home for the packages to arrive. (They would otherwise have to wait at home...)
If delivery companies could put (or leave) packages by their entrance,they do not have to wait at home.
Second,the delivery campanies can reduce delivery costs. (Secondly, ... companies...)
If customers do not stay in their home, drivers need to go (return) to the same house again.
For the reasons that I mentioned this service is going to mecome (become) common in the future.
Excellent writing, Taku. Well done!
David
9 tháng 1 năm 2024
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Taku Kobayashi
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Tiếng Anh, Tiếng Nhật, Tiếng Hàn Quốc
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