could u my first english writting ? My topic=Write about your fears and how you can overcome them. My fear is to be unsuccessfull .Because I was in future so successfull Student .I'd like to maintain my success from my chillhood in the future too .

Could you help edit my text? My topic = Write about your fears and how you can overcome them. I have a fear of being unsuccessful because I want to be a successful student in the future. I'd like to maintain my success from my chillhood in the future too.

hello Sanem, can I practıce Deutsch wıth you?