Yui
Can you correct my writing? Oct. 29th I woke up in the morning and did a dictation practice by using a podcast and song. I chose a song called “Steal My Girl” by One Direction. After that, I would try to go out and walk to the supermarket, but It was raining and black cloud was moving over my head. So I couldn’t. Instead, I could spend a good time watching Youtube videos and listening to interesting stories. It’s a quite indoor activity, but I wanted to go outside. You like sunny too? So I hope tomorrow must be sunny.
29 Thg 10 2024 14:39
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Can you correct my writing? Oct. 29th I woke up in the morning and did a dictation practice by using a podcast and song. I chose a song called “Steal My Girl” by One Direction. After that, I tried (use past simple here) to go out and walk to the supermarket, but It was raining and black cloud was moving over my head. So I couldn’t. Instead, I was able to spend a good time watching Youtube videos and listening to interesting stories. It’s a quite indoor activity, but I wanted to go outside. You like sunny (weather) too? So I hope tomorrow must/will be sunny. WELL DONE YUI. A nice piece of writing. Hardly any corrections. I like how you experiment with different tenses. You’re very descriptive too. Keep it up!
29 tháng 10 năm 2024
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