Someone translated the text bellow for English but I honestly found it odd. I am looking for a honest third opinion. What do you think? "I'm planning to visit my boyfriend who lives in S., BC and go sking with him in this same town. I also intend to visit the tourist attractions of H.G., as I am very interested in nature. He offered me this trip as a birthday present and, as this destination is where he, his family and friends live, I am more interested in going to this region, as I will be staying for a short period."