The pyramids, actually I'm obsessed with history and I really think that the pyramids are very interesting, specially because it was used as a mortuary for the pharaohs and people say that inside of t

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The pyramids, actually I'm obsessed with history and I really think that the pyramids are very interesting, specially because it was used as a mortuary for the pharaohs and people say that inside of the pyramids there's many narrow corridors and false passages and stuff.

31 Thg 12 2021 16:45

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The pyramids. (A sentence fragment is okay here.) Actually, I'm obsessed with history. I (really) think that the pyramids are (very) interesting (consider omitting "really" and/or "very"), especially because they were used as a mortuary for the pharaohs, and because there are many narrow corridors and false passages inside - or so people say.

I definitely agree; the pyramids are very cool! Your response was nicely written, and there weren't many grammatical mistakes to correct. Just be careful about singular/plural (i.e. The pyramids are interesting. They were used... There are many narrow corridors...). From a stylistic perspective, I'd recommend keeping your sentences a bit shorter and avoiding unnecessary filler words like "stuff".

31 tháng 12 năm 2021

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