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Doing a job that you like is more important than to earn more money.

Hey all!

For me the first reason that I want to find a job, because I want to travel, so even if I don't like the job or how stressful it is I have to take it to earn money to make my dream comes true, which is traveling.. 

Please if I have mistakes in me paragraph correct it to me. Thank you in advance.

And how about you? 

 

28 Thg 08 2015 15:52
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When you are young enough, you can experiment, change jobs or wait a little for the one you enjoy. 

As you get older, you have to support yourself financially. Money becomes important. If you don't have it, you just get a job that pays the bills. If you have it, you don't ask yourself such questions :)

28 tháng 8 năm 2015
Surely there are a wide range of works you may choose at this moment given you are still young and have chance to trial and error. 
14 tháng 3 năm 2018

Leyla, Fitzgerald, Christina and Ivan thank you for sharing your opinions and also for correcting my paragraph it was helpful. 

28 tháng 8 năm 2015

As for the English:

 

Doing a job that you like is more important than to earn more money.

 

Everything if fine about the title of the topic, but I would rephrase it as : Doing a job that you like is more important than earning (a lot of) money. 

 

You can leave it as it is - but then you would have to specify what are you reffering to by saying "to earn more money" - more than you currently do, or more than someone else, or just a lot of money in general cause that would make you feel better about yourself.

28 tháng 8 năm 2015

I would suggest you to think about setting up a passive income job or a job that you could do online. That would perfectly fit into your dream of traveling.

28 tháng 8 năm 2015
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