hi ,lily,my name is Laura.first i want be your friend ,and teach you chinese. Then about you sentences :
你好我叫美丽莎。this one is OK!
我是法国人你呢。if you use a comma between 人and你 it will be better.
我住在perpignan。this one no problem
我是学生和我一十八岁。please change it to two sentences as:我是学生。我十八岁。as i'm a student and i'm eighteen we don't always say together use 和 to put them together. another point for you, we nerver say 一十八岁,we only say 十instead of 一十for oral chinese.but we will say 二十,三十and so on.
在普通话里我们通常只用“我”表示自己,but we have a lot of way say “我”in our dialect . if you don't want see so many "我”in you sentences just leave same of them out. so your sentences can be say like :你好,我叫美丽莎,是个法国人,你呢?我住在perpignan,是个学生,今年十八岁。
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